[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 24 - kit

yourbookvoice · Post by **yourbookvoice** » September 28th, 2021, 6:07 am

Kitty wrote: ↑September 28th, 2021, 6:04 am
yourbookvoice wrote: ↑September 28th, 2021, 6:02 amI'd like to claim the following:
7 Escape of the Duston Family p. 382-383 Open
thank you, Kerry, lovely to have yet another new voice in the Rover collection

Have fun

Sonia

Thank you so much Sonia, I look forward to interpreting this exciting, albeit gruesome account. Have a great day.

Kerry

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2021, 6:09 am

yourbookvoice wrote: ↑September 28th, 2021, 6:07 amalbeit gruesome account.

thanks for warning me....

well...make it memorable

Sonia

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » September 28th, 2021, 7:49 am

Section 1 revised

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0124_1_various_128kb.mp3
8.42

I have made the requested change. I deliberately left a larger pause than usual as I felt it was better because the change of tone between the essay and the incantation was so drastic (at least I hope it was).

yourbookvoice · Post by **yourbookvoice** » September 28th, 2021, 3:49 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑September 28th, 2021, 6:09 am
yourbookvoice wrote: ↑September 28th, 2021, 6:07 amalbeit gruesome account.
thanks for warning me....

well...make it memorable

Sonia

I'll try to oblige...

Post by **Kitty** » September 28th, 2021, 11:16 pm

alanmapstone wrote: ↑September 28th, 2021, 7:49 amI deliberately left a larger pause than usual as I felt it was better because the change of tone between the essay and the incantation was so drastic (at least I hope it was).

yes I thought that was your aim, but still I think over 2 seconds is too long. It sounds much better now, thanks

PL ok

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 29th, 2021, 2:09 am

May I claim Section 5? Jim

Post by **Kitty** » September 29th, 2021, 2:11 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 29th, 2021, 2:09 amMay I claim Section 5?

making another project fully claimed, thank you Jim

That means I will launch the next one soon, stay tuned !

Moving this to Readers Found as well...

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » September 29th, 2021, 2:37 am

New project launched !

viewtopic.php?f=19&t=89286

Maybe I'll be seeing some of you in there again.

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 29th, 2021, 12:39 pm

Here is Section 5--I hope I didn't hurry too much:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0124_5_various_128kb.mp3

20:02

Jim

Post by **Kitty** » September 30th, 2021, 2:35 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 29th, 2021, 12:39 pmHere is Section 5--I hope I didn't hurry too much:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0124_5_various_128kb.mp3

didn't sound hurried to me

or what do you mean ?

Hard times on the people of this village ! But an interesting story and flawlessly narrated again, thank you, Jim

Only one small correction maybe, if you wouldn't mind:

> at 8:08: (p. 379): "and went on board the ---" – I would rather say "blank" (or optionally nothing at all, just leave a pause), than "ship" here, as I'm guessing the omission is meant to be the name of the ship. A bit further on you also simply left a pause, which is fully enough.

The rest is perfect

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 30th, 2021, 9:08 am

Hurried in the sense that I might have missed some mistakes on the review. I was not clear. I opted for the pause instead of blank.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0124_5_various_128kb.mp3

20:02

Jim

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » September 30th, 2021, 9:24 pm

Sonia,

Clocking in at a hefty 47:10, here is Section 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0124_3_various_128kb.mp3

Take care,

Greg

Post by **Kitty** » September 30th, 2021, 11:38 pm

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 30th, 2021, 9:08 am Hurried in the sense that I might have missed some mistakes on the review. I was not clear. I opted for the pause instead of blank.

fine with me, thanks. Now PL ok

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » October 1st, 2021, 12:41 am

GregGiordano wrote: ↑September 30th, 2021, 9:24 pmClocking in at a hefty 47:10, here is Section 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0124_3_various_128kb.mp3

that was a long one

but interesting !!! I loved the reminiscences of childhood in the beginning, and then the angle with the ghost was craftily inserted. You almost made me jump when you rasped "Bewaaaare".

Super cool. Loved it.

Totally PL ok. Thank you, Greg, and see you in the next one

Sonia

GregGiordano · Post by **GregGiordano** » October 1st, 2021, 3:51 am

Kitty wrote: ↑October 1st, 2021, 12:41 am
GregGiordano wrote: ↑September 30th, 2021, 9:24 pmClocking in at a hefty 47:10, here is Section 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0124_3_various_128kb.mp3
that was a long one but interesting !!! I loved the reminiscences of childhood in the beginning, and then the angle with the ghost was craftily inserted. You almost made me jump when you rasped "Bewaaaare". Super cool. Loved it.

Totally PL ok. Thank you, Greg, and see you in the next one

Sonia

Thanks, Sonia! As always, thank you for the kind words. It was a fun story to read.

Take care,

Greg

PS I'll be at the next one too!