[poetry] Humorous Poems by M.I. Brennan -ck

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Post by Carolin » June 10th, 2018, 11:12 pm

Thank you both :thumbs:


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Post by Foon » June 13th, 2018, 2:46 am

May I claim 51 and 52?
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Post by kpatin » June 13th, 2018, 6:24 am

Here's section 24 "Not Like I Used To Do" for review. It's 2:35 in length
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/humorouspoems_024_brennan_128kb.mp3
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Post by kpatin » June 13th, 2018, 8:32 am

Here's Section 25 "He's Always First", for review. It's 2:54 in length.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/humorouspoems_025_brennan_128kb.mp3
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Post by kpatin » June 13th, 2018, 9:17 am

Here's section 26 "All the while", for review. It 1:35 in length.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/humorouspoems_026_brennan_128kb.mp3
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Post by kpatin » June 13th, 2018, 9:57 am

Here's section 27 "The Mustache's Return", for review. It's 1:42 in length.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/humorouspoems_027_brennan_128kb.mp3
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Post by DrPGould » June 13th, 2018, 10:25 am

Betty:

Sections 0,2,5,7,35,76,87 are PL-OK! Nicely done! :clap:

One small correction in Section 4: At 0:12 I heard "now nowise surprise her" "now is an extra syllable.

Sorry I took so long to PL these--but I'm catching up I hope.

Many thanks,

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Post by kpatin » June 13th, 2018, 10:59 am

Here is section 28 "The Collector", for review. It's 2:23 in length.
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/humorouspoems_028_brennan_128kb.mp3
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Post by DrPGould » June 13th, 2018, 7:47 pm

BettyB:

Section 4 is PL OK!

Many thanks,

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Post by NemoR » June 13th, 2018, 8:42 pm

Phillip, section 83 is PL OK!
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Post by DrPGould » June 13th, 2018, 9:32 pm

Many thanks, Nemo!

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Post by Carolin » June 13th, 2018, 10:54 pm

Thank you all :thumbs:

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