Here are my first three sections.
excellent job in all three sections. I loved your narration of Dara
I read this poem myself for a JR Lowell project, but I think you did it better than me.
I also enjoyed the story of the turtle and peacock. I so feared it would have a bad ending and was totally relieved that it had a good moral.
Oh and thanks for giving the title of the painting entirely correct on the first go.
All three sections
PL ok.
And I also recorded my DR role, as well!
great interpretation of the king
I had a hunch you would do this well. You gave him an adequate moodiness and longing, which he probably felt at this point in his life. Here however I found a small error (I think):
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at 5:22: (p. 107): “in token of its reunion with the
spring” – even straining my ears I do not hear “spring” at the end.
Actually all throughout this section, in some parts your recording has a tendency to fade off and the last words are barely audible. I guess I can manually make them louder later on when I edit, so no need to correct, but I don’t know what happened to provoke this. Any ideas ?
Thanks so much, Tomas !
Sonia