[COMPLETE] The Mouthpiece of Zitu by J. U. Giesy - icequeen

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tjfria wrote: August 17th, 2022, 10:03 am Here is the corrected section 7:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_7_giesy_128kb.mp3 (37:20)
Thank you for this.

Sections 5, 8, and 10 are PL OK :thumbs:

Section 7 is mostly OK, but still has a couple of issues:
11:22, 18:13, 29:08 - pronunciation of Jasor - I still hear "jah-sor" here.

Section 9 also:
22:18, 22:25 - pronunciation of Jasor - I still hear "jah-sor" here.
26:58 - I hear "I shall breathe", text says "I shall bathe"

When you re-upload 7 & 9, can you please update the filename to have 2 digits. "07" and "09". Thank you.
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Sections 11 & 12 have been uploaded with a bit rate of 192kbps. This should be 128kbps.

There are also a few PL notes for both.
Section 11:

3:29, 16:18, - I hear "pah-los", should be "PAY-loss"
4:45 -missing line "as he was hers. He recalled her impassioned avowal of the love she had felt for him before old Zud's "
12:20, 12:23, 12:30, 12:50, 13:27, 13:32, 17:52, - I hear "jah-sor", should be "JAY-sor"
22:02 - I hear "her face buried in some sight between them", text says "her face buried from sight between them"

Section 12:

1:50 - Missing line "electric power first. Before that, however, he took Zud "
6:34 - I hear "if she maintains to me ", text says "if she mentions to me "
6:40, 16:52 - I hear "pah-los", should be "PAY-loss"
15:22 - missing lines: "view the new work. But he did not attempt to approach her again in the astral condition during the week longer that he remained at the site of the power-plant. Nor did Naia venture to it any more. And so soon as he was satisfied that his subordinates understood the exact scope of their duties, he returned to set about the actual construction of the dynamo that, water driven, should light Himyra with a myriad of glowing lamps. But that night"
15:29 - I hear "and they had walked over ", text says "and they had talked over "
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Section 13 PL Notes:

1:10-1:16 - repeated content/missed edit "whom he had trained to exact methods in making the motors"
12:46 - I hear "And she had accompanied", text says "And she had complained'
12:51 - I hear "given that his, by his astral ", text says "given by his astral "
18:25 - missed edit "and bid them do our will"
19:53 - missing content "and louder it rose, as faster and faster the shining armature which Croft and Robur watched spun round. Faster and faster, louder "
24:07 - repeated words "perchance you would feel as I do, perchance you would feel as do I, "
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Thank you for these. Unfortunately each needs 1 more small update:

Section 11:
All the corrections I request are A-OK. Unfortunately, I missed something.
At 00:01, you say "section 16". It should be "section 11". Sorry about that.


Section 12:
1:50 - Missing words "electric power first. Before that, however, he took Zud "
All other fixes are A-OK
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May I read Chapter 20? Regards, Brian
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Title: Chapter 3 - Harnessed to Heaven
Length: 18:58
Size: 18.21 MB
Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_03_giesy_128kb.mp3
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BrianFullen wrote: August 21st, 2022, 8:39 pm May I read Chapter 20? Regards, Brian
You may indeed :) Welcome to the team!
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paullawleyjones wrote: August 21st, 2022, 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Harnessed to Heaven
Length: 18:58
Size: 18.21 MB
Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_03_giesy_128kb.mp3
Thank you Paul. This is queued for PL
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Hi Tim,
A few notes on the last two sections.

Section 14:
18:44 - repeated line ""No, Mouthpiece of Zitu are you not called,"" is read twice
20:19 - I hear "betrothal grift ", text says "betrothal gift "

Section 15:
5:22 - I hear "protected against any more ", text says "protested against any more "
14:40 - I hear "now presses this demand. Bbeing not as Aphur ", text says "now presses this demand. Bithur, being not as Aphur "
20:20 - I hear "By Zitemku, by Zitemku, the friend whose " , text says "By Zitemku,, the fiend whose "
20:39 - repeated line "For aid I have sent already to Aphur" is read twice
21:09 - missing words ""Yet were it not better"—Lakkon put out a hand"
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paullawleyjones wrote: August 21st, 2022, 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Harnessed to Heaven
Length: 18:58
Size: 18.21 MB
Link: https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_03_giesy_128kb.mp3
Chapter 3 is PL OK :thumbs:
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pjtravis wrote: August 19th, 2022, 10:01 am Here is Ch.16. Any feedback is welcome.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_16_giesy_128kb.mp3

(25m:40s)
Very nicely read! This is PL OK :thumbs:
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Is it piggish of me to also want Section 19, "A Tawny Vampire"? If it helps my case, my birthday is in two weeks. We could call it a present. Thanks, Brian
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BrianFullen wrote: August 24th, 2022, 3:17 pm Is it piggish of me to also want Section 19, "A Tawny Vampire"? If it helps my case, my birthday is in two weeks. We could call it a present. Thanks, Brian
Always happy to oblige with an early birthday present ;) 19 is yours.
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Hi Krista

Here is number 21 hope is ok
I will fix number 1 tomorrow
enjoy the weekend
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https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_21_giesy_128kb.mp3
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