I have made these changes.
Also I am getting close to being overdue with the next chapter. I might be able to get to it tomorrow, but I am traveling soon and likely to finish in 1.5 weeks time.
I see others are due after me, so hopefully that does not cause any big issue.
brownrottger wrote: ↑March 13th, 2022, 4:19 pm
All edits confirmed. Just 2 more notes:
Beginning is still over 1 second silence i believe. It should be between .5 and 1 second
21:01 Should be "End of Sectionn 14" ; you say "end of section 22"
mr2nique wrote: ↑April 7th, 2022, 8:54 pm
I have made these changes.
Also I am getting close to being overdue with the next chapter. I might be able to get to it tomorrow, but I am traveling soon and likely to finish in 1.5 weeks time.
I see others are due after me, so hopefully that does not cause any big issue.
brownrottger wrote: ↑March 13th, 2022, 4:19 pm
All edits confirmed. Just 2 more notes:
Beginning is still over 1 second silence i believe. It should be between .5 and 1 second
21:01 Should be "End of Sectionn 14" ; you say "end of section 22"
Thank you. I'll queue chapter 14 for spot PL.
I'm happy to offer an extension on your other section. Just happy to know you are still interested