[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 25 - kit

[Kitty]

Hi there, here is the revised section 2 - new length - 9:51.12
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_02_various_128kb.mp3

thank you, totally PL ok now

Sonia

[Theginmann]

May I read section 4?
Thanks, Gini

[Kitty]

May I read section 4?

yes of course, happy to have you read another story

thank you, Gini

Sonia

[alanmapstone]

Section 1 - The Pool of Bethesda

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_01_various_128kb.mp3
1.57

MW gives the title as The Fool of Bethesda but I have read it as Pool

[Kitty]

Section 1 - The Pool of Bethesda
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_01_various_128kb.mp3
MW gives the title as The Fool of Bethesda but I have read it as Pool

my typo, sorry about that. It does make a difference in meaning

Thank you, Alan, I really loved the poem And it's perfectly PL ok again

Sonia

[JaniceCanada]

Hello Kitty,

I would be interested in recording and producing (I use Audacity) "Isolated Affection" if it is still open.

Cheers,
Janice
(JaniceCanada)

[Kitty]

I would be interested in recording and producing (I use Audacity) "Isolated Affection" if it is still open.

Hello Janice, welcome to our forum fun and especially to the Rover project. I'm always happy to hear new voices in this magazine so cool you chose this one to start out with. Thank you for your interest.

I see you already passed your technical test so I'll assign you the story right away.

Here is your personal reader page, where all your projects will be listed by and by: https://librivox.org/reader/16730
If you want another reader name, please let me know, and I can still change that. Some people prefer their full real name, or another pseudonym. Whatever you like.

Since you are new to recording, please read carefully through the first post, where you will find all the details on how exactly to read the intro/outro, title and how to name the finished file.

If there are still questions, don't hesitate to ask.

Have fun with your first official LV recording.

Sonia

[JaniceCanada]

Woo hoo! Thank you, Kitty. Great to be up and running! Happy with my reader name.

Best regards in (un)Isolated Affection,
Janice

[GregGiordano]

Here is Section 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_03_various_128kb.mp3

Run time is 11:02

Please note, at the end of Page 386, bottom of Column 2, there is a blank space in the source material. I imagine 4-5 words may have once been here. I searched several websites to find another version of this story so I could read this sentence in its entirety but could not locate another version anywhere. Instead I just skipped the few words that remained in that one sentence. In my opinion the loss of that sentence did not hurt the story at all.

Please advise if you think otherwise.

Take care,

Greg

[Kitty]

Here is Section 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_03_various_128kb.mp3

Please note, at the end of Page 386, bottom of Column 2, there is a blank space in the source material.

Thank you, Greg and sorry I didn't notice the missing words right away. I do have another source for such occasions.

What a tragic story I so much wished a little happiness in Ellen's future life but it wasn't to be.

Very sensitively narrated, I really enjoyed it.

Could you just please edited these few things:

> at 0:34: "the little hunch-backed girl" – sorry, my fault, I wrote "hump-backed" in the MW, I changed it now, it should be "hunch"

> at 7:30: concerning the missing sentence, I found another source, where the sentence is at least partially seen (with lots of magnifying), and I think it should run: "Your good aunt, with her beautiful Mary, is a less happy mother than me, Ellen."
Check here: https://archive.org/details/rover01labrgoog/page/n480/mode/1up

> at 8:02: "her sensitive nature" – you say "spirit", which only comes a line later

thank you

Sonia

[GregGiordano]

Here is Section 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_03_various_128kb.mp3

Please note, at the end of Page 386, bottom of Column 2, there is a blank space in the source material.

Thank you, Greg and sorry I didn't notice the missing words right away. I do have another source for such occasions.

What a tragic story I so much wished a little happiness in Ellen's future life but it wasn't to be.

Very sensitively narrated, I really enjoyed it.

Could you just please edited these few things:

> at 0:34: "the little hunch-backed girl" – sorry, my fault, I wrote "hump-backed" in the MW, I changed it now, it should be "hunch"

> at 7:30: concerning the missing sentence, I found another source, where the sentence is at least partially seen (with lots of magnifying), and I think it should run: "Your good aunt, with her beautiful Mary, is a less happy mother than me, Ellen."
Check here: https://archive.org/details/rover01labrgoog/page/n480/mode/1up

> at 8:02: "her sensitive nature" – you say "spirit", which only comes a line later

thank you

Sonia

Thanks, Sonia. I will work on it over the weekend!

Take care and have a great day!

Greg

[Theginmann]

Hi, here is section 4 - length - 19:1.60

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_04_various_128kb.mp3

Thanks, Gini

[GregGiordano]

Here is Section 3 with requested edits:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0125_03_various_128kb.mp3

New run time: 11:09

Thank you for finding the missing line, It sounds like it was an important line after all!

Take care,

Greg

[littlemissclumsy]

hello,
may I claim section 5 , the house of disaster , please?

[Kitty]

may I claim section 5 , the house of disaster , please?

thank you, yes, sure This will make us fully claimed now and I move us over to Readers Found

And with that we have another issue launched !!!! Maybe I'll see some of you in there as well:

viewtopic.php?f=26&t=89441

Sonia