chulsky wrote: ↑September 7th, 2021, 2:15 pm
Thank you, Amy, for the pleasure!
Sec. 5 and 7 are PL OK
Sec. 6 @9:35 "Lepchas" sounds like a stumble in your otherwise clear and smooth narration. Don't hesitate to push back if you meant it to sound like this
Thanks for the note! I think a case could be made for keeping it as is (since the speaker himself is unfamiliar with the word), but I'll probably fix it and re-upload the file in the next round.
chulsky wrote: ↑September 7th, 2021, 2:15 pm
"Lepchas" sounds like a stumble in your otherwise clear and smooth narration. Don't hesitate to push back if you meant it to sound like this
I think a case could be made for keeping it as is (since the speaker himself is unfamiliar with the word)
Amy
Exactly! It used to sound as if the narrator is unfamiliar with the word; now it sounds as if the character was unfamiliar -- much better
Sec.6,8,9 are PL OK
Congratulations Amy on completion of this solo recording for LibriVox! This book is now in the LibriVox catalog and available for listeners to download. Please check the catalog page and let me know if any changes are needed:
knotyouraveragejo wrote: ↑September 21st, 2021, 4:06 pm
Congratulations Amy on completion of this solo recording for LibriVox! This book is now in the LibriVox catalog and available for listeners to download. Please check the catalog page and let me know if any changes are needed: