[COMPLETE] XLI Poems by E. E. Cummings - icequeen
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All are PL OK.
I did notice you dropped your name from the intro. so we have some with and some without, but I don't see that as a particular problem if that is going to be consistent going forward.
I did notice you dropped your name from the intro. so we have some with and some without, but I don't see that as a particular problem if that is going to be consistent going forward.
~ Larry
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Thank you!
Yes i realized after 8th or 9th poem that i did it differently, as my habit is leaving it off. After that i just decided to leave it off to be consistent going forward and thinking i’d probably forget anyway
Scot
Yes i realized after 8th or 9th poem that i did it differently, as my habit is leaving it off. After that i just decided to leave it off to be consistent going forward and thinking i’d probably forget anyway
Scot
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I'll mark these PL OK.
Just my personal take, but I didn't particularly care for the audio alteration on 14. Came out sounding really "tinny." But I suppose it has its own charm.
~ Larry
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These are PL OK
I to like 14 better.
I to like 14 better.
~ Larry
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Marked all PL OK
Optional note for 27
at 0:47 I hear and extra syllable in the word "languorus" Sounds like, "lan-glor-i-ous"
I would pronounce it "LANG-or-ous."
I usually don't follow the text too closely, but this one grabbed my ear.
Corrections are entirely up to you. Cummings if pretty fluid, after all.
Optional note for 27
at 0:47 I hear and extra syllable in the word "languorus" Sounds like, "lan-glor-i-ous"
I would pronounce it "LANG-or-ous."
I usually don't follow the text too closely, but this one grabbed my ear.
Corrections are entirely up to you. Cummings if pretty fluid, after all.
~ Larry
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Oh yes! Thank you for your ears! I changed the word that was spoken with runcible tongue (must have wanted it to sound like a ‘glorious hymn’)silverquill wrote: ↑July 14th, 2021, 8:40 am Marked all PL OK
Optional note for 27
at 0:47 I hear and extra syllable in the word "languorus" Sounds like, "lan-glor-i-ous"
I would pronounce it "LANG-or-ous."
I usually don't follow the text too closely, but this one grabbed my ear.
Corrections are entirely up to you. Cummings if pretty fluid, after all.
I double checked it so you don’t have to listen unless you want to