[COMPLETE] XLI Poems by E. E. Cummings - icequeen
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All are PL OK.
I did notice you dropped your name from the intro. so we have some with and some without, but I don't see that as a particular problem if that is going to be consistent going forward.
I did notice you dropped your name from the intro. so we have some with and some without, but I don't see that as a particular problem if that is going to be consistent going forward.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
Thank you!
Yes i realized after 8th or 9th poem that i did it differently, as my habit is leaving it off. After that i just decided to leave it off to be consistent going forward and thinking i’d probably forget anyway
Scot
Yes i realized after 8th or 9th poem that i did it differently, as my habit is leaving it off. After that i just decided to leave it off to be consistent going forward and thinking i’d probably forget anyway
Scot
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I'll mark these PL OK.
Just my personal take, but I didn't particularly care for the audio alteration on 14. Came out sounding really "tinny." But I suppose it has its own charm.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
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These are PL OK
I to like 14 better.
I to like 14 better.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
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Marked all PL OK
Optional note for 27
at 0:47 I hear and extra syllable in the word "languorus" Sounds like, "lan-glor-i-ous"
I would pronounce it "LANG-or-ous."
I usually don't follow the text too closely, but this one grabbed my ear.
Corrections are entirely up to you. Cummings if pretty fluid, after all.
Optional note for 27
at 0:47 I hear and extra syllable in the word "languorus" Sounds like, "lan-glor-i-ous"
I would pronounce it "LANG-or-ous."
I usually don't follow the text too closely, but this one grabbed my ear.
Corrections are entirely up to you. Cummings if pretty fluid, after all.
On the road again, so delays are possible
~ Larry
~ Larry
Oh yes! Thank you for your ears! I changed the word that was spoken with runcible tongue (must have wanted it to sound like a ‘glorious hymn’)silverquill wrote: ↑July 14th, 2021, 8:40 am Marked all PL OK
Optional note for 27
at 0:47 I hear and extra syllable in the word "languorus" Sounds like, "lan-glor-i-ous"
I would pronounce it "LANG-or-ous."
I usually don't follow the text too closely, but this one grabbed my ear.
Corrections are entirely up to you. Cummings if pretty fluid, after all.
I double checked it so you don’t have to listen unless you want to