[COMPLETE - Weekly Poetry] On The High Price Of Fish by William Cowper - dl

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Fun poem! My recording this week comes in at 0:45

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/highprice_cowper_ec_128kb.mp3
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Hi David ... here's one from me:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/highprice_cowper_gln_128kb.mp3

With a length of 0:52. Thanks a lot,

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I had a listen to yours, David, and noticed just a couple of things:

"ever I" saw transposed to "I ever" saw

In the final verse, you omitted "And" in the penultimate line, and "oft" to "often" in the last line.

Garth
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ebarnett wrote: June 9th, 2021, 10:25 am https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/highprice_cowper_ekb_128kb.mp3 It is now only 0:46. Is this volume better?
The volume is good, but at 0:18 the phrase "That ever I saw" is read as "That I ever saw" :wink:
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Veggrower wrote: June 9th, 2021, 11:03 am I had a listen to yours, David, and noticed just a couple of things:

"ever I" saw transposed to "I ever" saw

In the final verse, you omitted "And" in the penultimate line, and "oft" to "often" in the last line.

Garth
Thank you garth, edited version...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/highprice_cowper_dl_128kb.mp3
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Thank you Bruce, Erin, Elizabeth and Garth. :thumbs:
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Thank you for that edit Lisa, but you may wish to correct the following - at 0:17 the phrase "That ever I saw" is read as "That I ever saw"
(Sorry, I missed that error the first time around} :oops:
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Maybe not Cowper's best poem, but here you go:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/highprice_cowper_lcw_128kb.mp3 0:47
On the road again, so delays are possible
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Thank you Larry. :thumbs:
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Yours is PL OK! David

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Bible Student and Husband of "The Lovely Linda" :9:
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Here you go:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/highprice_cowper_mlm_128kb.mp3
0:59

Please let me know of any issues.

Thanks,

M
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