Two missing phrases.
23:25 missing "of his shady past," after " an interminable anecdote"
32:15 missing "Then there was Jim Thomson," before "generally a perfect mine"
mleigh wrote: ↑May 18th, 2021, 7:23 am
Section 9
21:19 Sounds like "smoke of a track through the trees". instead of "smoke of a train through the trees".
mleigh wrote: ↑May 18th, 2021, 7:23 am
Section 9
21:19 Sounds like "smoke of a track through the trees". instead of "smoke of a train through the trees".
mleigh wrote: ↑May 18th, 2021, 7:23 am
Section 9
21:19 Sounds like "smoke of a track through the trees". instead of "smoke of a train through the trees".
mleigh wrote: ↑May 18th, 2021, 5:18 pm
Section 11, One comment, at 0:51 you have "JB" instead of "4B". I honestly do not know if this is significant. What is your take on it? Leave or fix?
Section 12, One correction needed.
at 1:51, there is a repeat of "The question is,"
The poem at the beginning at 0:26 has "And the culminating pleasure". You have "cumulating" which doesn't quite mean the same thing but does work there. I'm leaving this to your discretion if you feel it is close enough or you want to change. Let me know.