[COMPLETE]Tales of St. Austin's by PG Wodehouse - dc
Section 8
Two missing phrases.
23:25 missing "of his shady past," after " an interminable anecdote"
32:15 missing "Then there was Jim Thomson," before "generally a perfect mine"
Section 9
21:19 Sounds like "smoke of a track through the trees". instead of "smoke of a train through the trees".
Another amusing tale although I do wish I understood all the sports terms.
Thanks,
M
Two missing phrases.
23:25 missing "of his shady past," after " an interminable anecdote"
32:15 missing "Then there was Jim Thomson," before "generally a perfect mine"
Section 9
21:19 Sounds like "smoke of a track through the trees". instead of "smoke of a train through the trees".
Another amusing tale although I do wish I understood all the sports terms.
Thanks,
M
Thank you!mleigh wrote: ↑May 18th, 2021, 7:23 am Section 8
Two missing phrases.
23:25 missing "of his shady past," after " an interminable anecdote"
32:15 missing "Then there was Jim Thomson," before "generally a perfect mine"
Section 9
21:19 Sounds like "smoke of a track through the trees". instead of "smoke of a train through the trees".
Another amusing tale although I do wish I understood all the sports terms.
Thanks,
M
I must be getting too enthusiastic in my editing. (Well, reckless would be a better word.)
Rugby and Cricket are notoriously hard to understand, unless you're born to it, I guess.
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Section 10 is PL OK.
I was going to question where the "one" came from at the beginning, but then there was a "two" later on in the text. So, the "one" is ok even though it is not in the text.
Section 11, One comment, at 0:51 you have "JB" instead of "4B". I honestly do not know if this is significant. What is your take on it? Leave or fix?
Section 12, One correction needed.
at 1:51, there is a repeat of "The question is,"
Thanks,
M
I see you snuck in the next section on me. I'll get on that soon.
I was going to question where the "one" came from at the beginning, but then there was a "two" later on in the text. So, the "one" is ok even though it is not in the text.
Section 11, One comment, at 0:51 you have "JB" instead of "4B". I honestly do not know if this is significant. What is your take on it? Leave or fix?
Section 12, One correction needed.
at 1:51, there is a repeat of "The question is,"
Thanks,
M
I see you snuck in the next section on me. I'll get on that soon.
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I hope your neck gets better quickly. That sounds painful.KevinS wrote: ↑May 28th, 2021, 12:57 pm Section 14
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Enjoyed the section on Work. One comment on it.
The poem at the beginning at 0:26 has "And the culminating pleasure". You have "cumulating" which doesn't quite mean the same thing but does work there. I'm leaving this to your discretion if you feel it is close enough or you want to change. Let me know.
Thanks,
M
(Oh, and you owe me one. I saw the DPL request in for sam the sudden, it I have the title right, and was going to volunteer but then I saw the comment about you helping him with locating it. So, I figured I should give you the chance to do it if you wished., which you did. (just kidding about owing me one, of course.))
I do owe you a lot!mleigh wrote: ↑May 28th, 2021, 5:51 pmI hope your neck gets better quickly. That sounds painful.KevinS wrote: ↑May 28th, 2021, 12:57 pm Section 14
https://librivox.org/uploads/craigdav1/talesofstaustins_14_wodehouse_128kb.mp3 (18:11)
Enjoyed the section on Work. One comment on it.
The poem at the beginning at 0:26 has "And the culminating pleasure". You have "cumulating" which doesn't quite mean the same thing but does work there. I'm leaving this to your discretion if you feel it is close enough or you want to change. Let me know.
Thanks,
M
(Oh, and you owe me one. I saw the DPL request in for sam the sudden, it I have the title right, and was going to volunteer but then I saw the comment about you helping him with locating it. So, I figured I should give you the chance to do it if you wished., which you did. (just kidding about owing me one, of course.))
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I did love all his names in that paragraph.
Section 2 correction.
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Section 3 corrections:mleigh wrote: ↑May 7th, 2021, 6:33 pm Section 3 has several issues.
1 - 5:28, sounds like "telegram for" not "telegram from"
2 - 5:50, should be "nee Miss Dorothy" not "Mrs"
3 - 7:28, the "5" is missing for the fifth letter
4 - 13:07, should be "Lord Marmaduke Twistleton" not "Thistleton". As Twistletons feature in other PG Wodehouse books, it should probably be corrected.
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Section 16 is now Section 17 as you will remember. I have made the correction.mleigh wrote: ↑May 8th, 2021, 4:02 pm Section 16 was a bit on the strange side. It was well read too. I just have one comment on it and would appreciate your listening to the passage and either correct it or let me know if I have misheard what you said.
~3:26 the text reads "'Never,' I shouted, with enthusiasm." It sounds to me like the verb you used is "crowded", if your word is actually "crowed" or "cried" it would fit in the text and would be acceptable.
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Section 6 corrections:mleigh wrote: ↑May 11th, 2021, 3:50 pm
Alas, there is a sentence left out here.
around 3:30, text reads "Oh, you mean for the Thucydides. I don't know. Mellish sets the bits" . The sentence "I don't know" is missing. Also you have "takes" instead of "sets" at the beginning of the following sentence.
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