[COMPLETE]Gaudium Crucis: A meditation for Good Friday-mtf
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Section 7 PL ok!
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And section 8 PL ok!
So only a few notes to go through, and most of those were optional. Let me know when those are ready for Spot PL, and we'll be able to get this in the catalogue, maybe even in May!
So only a few notes to go through, and most of those were optional. Let me know when those are ready for Spot PL, and we'll be able to get this in the catalogue, maybe even in May!
Ready for Spot Check, I hope.mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 9th, 2021, 8:00 pm Kevin, I think I'm going to really truly enjoy listening to this. What a great text, just from this first section, and you read it well. I look forward to hearing more, but I only had time for one tonight.
2:03 Word change here. I might not have noticed it if I wasn't following along, so I don't know that it counts as part of standard PL. But, for what it's worth, the text reads (p. viii), "the freezing reason's colder part." I hear "the freezing region's colder part."
5:20 The Greek word here is pronounced IK-thoos, if you'd like to include it. Personally, I think that you should, just as we wouldn't omit or simply translate French or German words that sometimes appear in the texts we read.
13:41 Again, I would not have caught this one had I not had the text in front of me. But here (p. 6), the author repeats this clause for emphasis: "Suffers us not to be silent." I suspect that you heard the repetition in editing and thought it was a mistake.
16:01-16:15 In this section, you have two takes of "and we come in its light and peace to listen if the risen Christ will speak some word to us from out the glory." (p. 7-8) Both takes sound good to me, so just choose one to keep and one to toss.
I'm embarrassed about leaving out the Greek. I meant to look it up.
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Section 3 corrected.mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 16th, 2021, 5:56 pm Section 3:
13:30 This is one I'll call OPTIONAL. It's quite clear what is meant, but it sounds odd here. P. 29 says: "...and to the word of grace on the one hand corresponds the silence of doom on the other." I hear: "...and to the word of grace on the other hand corresponds the silence of doom on the other."
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Corrected. I hope this is better.mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 31st, 2021, 3:48 pm Section 5:
17:20 OPTIONAL suggestion. This is a personal stylistic choice, and it works fine the way you have it. P. 58: "Let not him who seeks [eternal life?] cease till he finds." You have read this as: "Let not him who seeks, bracket, eternal life, question mark, close bracket, cease till he finds." Personally, I find this stilted and clunky, and would probably have chosen to read it as: "Let not him who seeks (pause) eternal life? (pause) cease till he finds," speaking the words "eternal life" with a rising inflection. But as I said, that is a personal choice. So I put this out simply for your consideration. If you still like your choice best, then by all means disregard this suggestion.
Otherwise PL ok!
Same time.
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1 and 3 are PL ok now! I still hear the same thing in section 5 though, and looking at my uploader folder, there is still only one version of section 5 there. So either you forgot to re-upload that one, or the upload didn't complete.
Oh boy! No wonder the times were the same! I forgot to upload the corrected version, apparently.mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 31st, 2021, 9:02 pm I still hear the same thing in section 5 though, and looking at my uploader folder, there is still only one version of section 5 there. So either you forgot to re-upload that one, or the upload didn't complete.
Correction made now.
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PL ok. Nice work! I'll start cataloguing!
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This project is now complete! All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/gaudium-crucis-by-walter-lowrie/
Thank you!mightyfelix wrote: ↑June 2nd, 2021, 9:09 pm This project is now complete! All audio files can be found on our catalog page: https://librivox.org/gaudium-crucis-by-walter-lowrie/
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