COMPLETE [Fortnightly Poetry] The Churchyard by the Sea by Jesse C. Howden - dl

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Thank you Erin. :thumbs:
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Greetings - my Churchyard Submission

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/churchyard_howden_dn_128kb.mp3

Time- 2 mins 17 secs

Darrell

Thanks for allowing me to read & record for others enjoyment!!
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Thank you Darrell, good reading. But, there is one mis-read you may wish to correct -
at 1:44 I hear "The fiery clouds went drifting by" text reads "The fleecy clouds went drifting by"
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Thank you Elizabeth. :thumbs:
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Post by ehl17 »

Here is my revision:


https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/churchyard_howden_el_128kb.mp3


1:56

Do let me know if you require anything else. Sorry for the late response.
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Thank you for the edit Eric, now PL OK. :D
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Correction on read The Churchyard by the Sea

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/churchyard_howden_dn_128kb.mp3
Time- 2 mins 12 sec


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thank you for the edit Darrell. Now PL OK.
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Post by Veggrower »

And here's my Fortnightly, with a length of 2:28:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/churchyard_howden_gln_128kb.mp3

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Thank you Garth. :thumbs:
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Hi,

I'm quite happy to find here an English project where I don't need to be fast to grasp a free spot. :clap: Until now, I have only managed to participate in non-English projects.

Here is the link to my first English contribution:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/churchyard_howden_yg_128kb.mp3
File duration: 02:28

Please let me know, if there is anything I can improve. Thank you! :)

Best, YG
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Welcome gyllila and thank you for your reading, which is PL OK. :thumbs:
gyllila wrote: April 30th, 2021, 10:34 am
Please let me know, if there is anything I can improve. Thank you! :)

Best, YG
Since you've asked, the only thing I can mention is that I hear some mouth noises during your reading, you could try backing away from the mic a little, you have enough volume that it would not matter.
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aradlaw wrote: April 30th, 2021, 11:10 am Welcome gyllila and thank you for your reading, which is PL OK. :thumbs:

Since you've asked, the only thing I can mention is that I hear some mouth noises during your reading, you could try backing away from the mic a little, you have enough volume that it would not matter.
Thank you, David, that’s very nice of you. :thumbs:

Next time, I will sit as far away from my laptop as I can.

Best, YG
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gyllila wrote: April 30th, 2021, 11:29 am Next time, I will sit as far away from my laptop as I can.

Best, YG
NO, not that far, I think the volume will be too low! best experiment a little. :wink:
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