Complete-[CHILD/NATURE] Our Feathered Friends, by Elizabeth & Joseph Grinnel-ag

[silverquill]

Hello,
I have completed Section 12 - Before Breakfast https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_12_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration is 07:44

Please provide feedback if any.
Thank you for the opportunity,
SmilingJade

Thank you for the fast turn around!
This is Ready for PL.

[mleigh]

Hello,
I have completed Section 12 - Before Breakfast https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_12_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration is 07:44

Please provide feedback if any.
Thank you for the opportunity,
SmilingJade

Thank you for the fast turn around!
This is Ready for PL.

Two little corrections needed to make this PL OK.

1. Please add about 0.5 seconds of silence to the start.
2. Around 3:10, you have "asked Mr. old Butcher-bird", it should be "asked old Mr. Butcher-bird". Just need to reverse the order of old and Mr.

Thanks,

M

[ColleenMc]

Here are my sections -- thanks for your patience!


https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_17_grinnell_128kb.mp3

6:28

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_18_grinnell_128kb.mp3

8:59

Colleen

[Smilingjade]

I have made the revisions per your feedback.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_12_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration 07:45

Please let me know of any further feedback.
Thanks.
SmilingJade

[silverquill]

Here are my sections -- thanks for your patience!


https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_17_grinnell_128kb.mp3

6:28

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_18_grinnell_128kb.mp3

8:59

Colleen

Thank you so much!
I thought we might get this in for April, but still waiting for some adopted orphans.

[silverquill]

I have made the revisions per your feedback.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_12_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration 07:45

Please let me know of any further feedback.
Thanks.
SmilingJade

Thanks!
Ready for Spot PL

[mleigh]

I have made the revisions per your feedback.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_12_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration 07:45

Please let me know of any further feedback.
Thanks.
SmilingJade

Thanks!
Ready for Spot PL

Chapter 12 is PL OK.

Thanks,

M

[mleigh]

Here are my sections -- thanks for your patience!


https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_17_grinnell_128kb.mp3

6:28

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_18_grinnell_128kb.mp3

8:59

Colleen

Well, they were worth the wait. Good job on both sections. Both are PL OK.


Thanks,

M

[Bookworm360]

Chapter 7 is ready for PL!
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_07_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration 5:04(finally I remember!)

[Bookworm360]

So's chapter 8!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_08_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration 5:45

[Bookworm360]

And finally, chapter 20. Lovely project silverquill!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_20_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration 7:25

[silverquill]

And finally, chapter 20. Lovely project silverquill!

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_20_grinnell_128kb.mp3
Duration 7:25

I'm sure that our DPL won't mind my jumping in to listen to these last three.
I'm marking them all PL OK, but I do have a couple of comments.

Especially in Sections 7 and 8 there was a lot of microphone rustling noise. Just be careful about bumping, moving or handling the mike. Borderline, but I won't ask you to record it over. Also, be careful that the endling silence doesn't go much over 5 seconds.

Just a general comment. I find you pace very fast, and I think too fast for this material. I think your recording would be much better if you slowed down and be a lot easier to listen to. This would also help decrease some of the mouth noise that the mike is picking up and some of the awkward pauses.

Anyway, thank you so much for helping us with these orphans and getting this project to completion.

All the best,

[silverquill]

With our last sections in, our feathered friends can be released to the world!

Thank you to ALL of our excellent readers who have made this book so good.

I huge thanks to M our faithful DPL for a lot of good work.

And, finally a big thank you to Amy, or MC for all of the work that goes into managing the project, mostly behind the scenes.

Congratulations to you all.

PS: I think we have one more Grinnell and Grinnell book to put up soon.

[alg1001]

It has been lovely to work on this! Thanks for BCing such interesting books. I will start cataloging.

[ColleenMc]

Here are my sections -- thanks for your patience!


https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_17_grinnell_128kb.mp3

6:28

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/ourfeatheredfriends_18_grinnell_128kb.mp3

8:59

Colleen

Well, they were worth the wait. Good job on both sections. Both are PL OK.


Thanks,

M

Thank you!

Colleen