I'm sure that our DPL won't mind my jumping in to listen to these last three.
I'm marking them all PL OK, but I do have a couple of comments.
Especially in Sections 7 and 8 there was a lot of microphone rustling noise. Just be careful about bumping, moving or handling the mike. Borderline, but I won't ask you to record it over. Also, be careful that the endling silence doesn't go much over 5 seconds.
Just a general comment. I find you pace very fast, and I think too fast for this material. I think your recording would be much better if you slowed down and be a lot easier to listen to. This would also help decrease some of the mouth noise that the mike is picking up and some of the awkward pauses.
Anyway, thank you so much for helping us with these orphans and getting this project to completion.
All the best,