COMPLETE: The Progressive Woman, Vol. VII, No. 75 -jo

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Kevin,
Thank you for posting the corrections. I will listen to them and get back to you with the conclusions. :D
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adr6090 wrote: May 3rd, 2021, 10:11 am Kevin,
Thank you for posting the corrections. I will listen to them and get back to you with the conclusions. :D
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Thank you!

And I'll try to finish them off soon.
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:9: Sections 1, 6 ,7, 27 & 28 are all pl okay now, good job Kevin!!
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adr6090 wrote: May 3rd, 2021, 2:22 pm :9: Sections 1, 6 ,7, 27 & 28 are all pl okay now, good job Kevin!!
Thank you!
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Section 9, 11, and 12 corrections.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/progwomanvol07no75_09_various_128kb.mp3 (6:28)
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/progwomanvol07no75_11_various_128kb.mp3 (same time)
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/progwomanvol07no75_12_various_128kb.mp3 (1:27)

I am so sorry for having taken so long to get to these. I'll have Section 24 done tomorrow for sure!
adr6090 wrote: February 9th, 2021, 5:42 pm Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09 ... & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.

section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.
adr6090 wrote: February 17th, 2021, 5:55 pm Note for section 1[1];
I hear "a weak training effect" @ 1:31, it should be "a weak tanning effect"-please change.
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adr6090 wrote: April 5th, 2021, 3:36 pm Hello Kevin! I have listened to chapter 24, following are the edits.
*01:45 I hear "would probably have been" text reads " would hardly have been"
*19:50 I hear "in the big concern" text is " in the small concern"
*21:45 I hear " to present prosperity" & 21:47 "to present greatness" please change the pronunciation of the word "present" so it sounds more like to display as opposed to a gift.
*36:30 I hear "before she could divine her purpose" while it should be "before he could divine her purpose".
Corrections to Section 24 made with the exception of 21:45 and 21:47. Don't you think that these two instances refer to current prosperity and current greatness?
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KevinS wrote: June 11th, 2021, 8:24 pm Section 9, 11, and 12 corrections.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/progwomanvol07no75_09_various_128kb.mp3 (6:28)
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/progwomanvol07no75_11_various_128kb.mp3 (same time)
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/progwomanvol07no75_12_various_128kb.mp3 (1:27)

I am so sorry for having taken so long to get to these. I'll have Section 24 done tomorrow for sure!
adr6090 wrote: February 9th, 2021, 5:42 pm Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09 ... & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.

section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.

Hello Kevin,
Thank you for posting the corrections and I will listen to them, all of them.
April
I will listen to the spot checks
adr6090 wrote: February 17th, 2021, 5:55 pm Note for section 1[1];
I hear "a weak training effect" @ 1:31, it should be "a weak tanning effect"-please change.
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Thank you! No real rush.
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Kevin,
Your perfectly well-done edits have ensured that ALL of the sections are pl okay!! :D
Your assessment of section 24 was spot on, great catch on me for my error :oops: .
Hope that your neck is feeling much better today.
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Anything to add before this gets cataloged, Kevin?
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adr6090 wrote: June 13th, 2021, 1:56 pm Kevin,
Your perfectly well-done edits have ensured that ALL of the sections are pl okay!! :D
Your assessment of section 24 was spot on, great catch on me for my error :oops: .
Hope that your neck is feeling much better today.
Thank you!

I'm slowly getting better. Or at least finding therapies to remedy the ache.

Thanks very much for serving as DPL; you're really good at it and I appreciate your patience with me.
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knotyouraveragejo wrote: June 13th, 2021, 2:01 pm Anything to add before this gets cataloged, Kevin?
No, though I'm beginning to get worried about my short summaries.

Thank you for serving as MC for this project.
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