COMPLETE: The Progressive Woman, Vol. VII, No. 75 -jo
Thank you. I hope these will be interesting for you.
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Here are section 06 & section 07 pl results:
section 06 edit:
@ 2:00 minutes I hear an unnecessary word, "spirit". Please do remove that.
section 07 edits:
@ 4:04 the word "not" is not in the text, please remove it.
@ 4:40 I hear "woman's footness" & it should be "woman's fitness", please fix this.
Both sections are well read overall so please do the above edits and repost.
section 06 edit:
@ 2:00 minutes I hear an unnecessary word, "spirit". Please do remove that.
section 07 edits:
@ 4:04 the word "not" is not in the text, please remove it.
@ 4:40 I hear "woman's footness" & it should be "woman's fitness", please fix this.
Both sections are well read overall so please do the above edits and repost.
April
Thank you the careful PL. I don't know where these words come from! (I mean, what motivates them or brings them forth. I sometimes feel as though I've officially entered my dotage.)adr6090 wrote: ↑February 7th, 2021, 1:08 pm Here are section 06 & section 07 pl results:
section 06 edit:
@ 2:00 minutes I hear an unnecessary word, "spirit". Please do remove that.
section 07 edits:
@ 4:04 the word "not" is not in the text, please remove it.
@ 4:40 I hear "woman's footness" & it should be "woman's fitness", please fix this.
Both sections are well read overall so please do the above edits and repost.
My LibriVox: https://librivox.org/sections/readers/13278
You are welcome for my pling. Your dotage? Sounds entertaining when you use that word. Not necessary to wonder just why or how the errant words come about, just be accepting and move on.KevinS wrote: ↑February 7th, 2021, 2:03 pmThank you the careful PL. I don't know where these words come from! (I mean, what motivates them or brings them forth. I sometimes feel as though I've officially entered my dotage.)adr6090 wrote: ↑February 7th, 2021, 1:08 pm Here are section 06 & section 07 pl results:
section 06 edit:
@ 2:00 minutes I hear an unnecessary word, "spirit". Please do remove that.
section 07 edits:
@ 4:04 the word "not" is not in the text, please remove it.
@ 4:40 I hear "woman's footness" & it should be "woman's fitness", please fix this.
Both sections are well read overall so please do the above edits and repost.
April
Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09, 10 & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.
section 10 is perfect
section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.
I promise to pl the newly posted ones in the near future.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.
section 10 is perfect
section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.
I promise to pl the newly posted ones in the near future.
April
Thank you!adr6090 wrote: ↑February 9th, 2021, 5:42 pm Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09, 10 & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.
section 10 is perfect
section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.
I promise to pl the newly posted ones in the near future.
No need to rush with this project. I'm just glad it is nearing completion. (The text has been a little difficult for me to read.) But I'm finding it all very interesting. More than 100 years have passed and I think women often face the same struggles of a century ago.
My LibriVox: https://librivox.org/sections/readers/13278
Wow Kevin,KevinS wrote: ↑February 9th, 2021, 6:05 pmThank you!adr6090 wrote: ↑February 9th, 2021, 5:42 pm Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09, 10 & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.
section 10 is perfect
section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.
I promise to pl the newly posted ones in the near future.
No need to rush with this project. I'm just glad it is nearing completion. (The text has been a little difficult for me to read.) But I'm finding it all very interesting. More than 100 years have passed and I think women often face the same struggles of a century ago.
Thank you for mentioning that there is no need to rush with this project.
Looks to me according to the mw, there is only 1 section left for you to record.
If time allows I am more than pleased to dpl 3-5 sections a day.
April
Absolutely no need to rush. "We'll get done when we get done." I think that last is a quote from Michelangelo referring to the Sistine Chapel's ceiling.
My LibriVox: https://librivox.org/sections/readers/13278
That Slang section was nearly impossible for me! Haha!
My LibriVox: https://librivox.org/sections/readers/13278