COMPLETE: The Progressive Woman, Vol. VII, No. 75 -jo

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Sec. 6 and 7 uploaded. (No rush on these.)
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KevinS wrote: February 3rd, 2021, 2:00 pm Sec. 6 and 7 uploaded. (No rush on these.)
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adr6090 wrote: February 4th, 2021, 9:26 am
KevinS wrote: February 3rd, 2021, 2:00 pm Sec. 6 and 7 uploaded. (No rush on these.)
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Thank you. I hope these will be interesting for you.
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KevinS wrote: February 4th, 2021, 9:38 am
adr6090 wrote: February 4th, 2021, 9:26 am
KevinS wrote: February 3rd, 2021, 2:00 pm Sec. 6 and 7 uploaded. (No rush on these.)
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Thank you. I hope these will be interesting for you.
ditto. ;)
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Here are section 06 & section 07 pl results:

section 06 edit:
@ 2:00 minutes I hear an unnecessary word, "spirit". Please do remove that.

section 07 edits:
@ 4:04 the word "not" is not in the text, please remove it.
@ 4:40 I hear "woman's footness" & it should be "woman's fitness", please fix this.

Both sections are well read overall so please do the above edits and repost.
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adr6090 wrote: February 7th, 2021, 1:08 pm Here are section 06 & section 07 pl results:

section 06 edit:
@ 2:00 minutes I hear an unnecessary word, "spirit". Please do remove that.

section 07 edits:
@ 4:04 the word "not" is not in the text, please remove it.
@ 4:40 I hear "woman's footness" & it should be "woman's fitness", please fix this.

Both sections are well read overall so please do the above edits and repost.
Thank you the careful PL. I don't know where these words come from! (I mean, what motivates them or brings them forth. I sometimes feel as though I've officially entered my dotage.)
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KevinS wrote: February 7th, 2021, 2:03 pm
adr6090 wrote: February 7th, 2021, 1:08 pm Here are section 06 & section 07 pl results:

section 06 edit:
@ 2:00 minutes I hear an unnecessary word, "spirit". Please do remove that.

section 07 edits:
@ 4:04 the word "not" is not in the text, please remove it.
@ 4:40 I hear "woman's footness" & it should be "woman's fitness", please fix this.

Both sections are well read overall so please do the above edits and repost.
Thank you the careful PL. I don't know where these words come from! (I mean, what motivates them or brings them forth. I sometimes feel as though I've officially entered my dotage.)
You are welcome for my pling. Your dotage? Sounds entertaining when you use that word. :lol: Not necessary to wonder just why or how the errant words come about, just be accepting and move on. :D
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Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09, 10 & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.

section 10 is perfect

section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.

I promise to pl the newly posted ones in the near future. :thumbs:
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adr6090 wrote: February 9th, 2021, 5:42 pm Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09, 10 & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.

section 10 is perfect

section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.

I promise to pl the newly posted ones in the near future. :thumbs:
Thank you!

No need to rush with this project. I'm just glad it is nearing completion. (The text has been a little difficult for me to read.) But I'm finding it all very interesting. More than 100 years have passed and I think women often face the same struggles of a century ago.
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KevinS wrote: February 9th, 2021, 6:05 pm
adr6090 wrote: February 9th, 2021, 5:42 pm Wow Kevin, I see you have been busy recording, great job. I will post my findings on sections 09, 10 & 12.
section 09 edits;
@ 1:44 I hear "twenty" while it should be "twenty-one" -take out twenty & put in twenty-one please.
@ 6:09 after " before dealing" & before "as we announced" there should be the sentence " with the United States constitution and showing its existing flaws". Put in the line if you will.

section 10 is perfect

section 12 does have one error.
@ 26.0 I hear "being only factory kids" while it should be "being only factory girls". Out with kids and in with girls, please.

I promise to pl the newly posted ones in the near future. :thumbs:
Thank you!

No need to rush with this project. I'm just glad it is nearing completion. (The text has been a little difficult for me to read.) But I'm finding it all very interesting. More than 100 years have passed and I think women often face the same struggles of a century ago.
Wow Kevin,
Thank you for mentioning that there is no need to rush with this project.
Looks to me according to the mw, there is only 1 section left for you to record.
If time allows I am more than pleased to dpl 3-5 sections a day.
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adr6090 wrote: February 10th, 2021, 3:01 pm Wow Kevin,
Thank you for mentioning that there is no need to rush with this project.
Looks to me according to the mw, there is only 1 section left for you to record.
If time allows I am more than pleased to dpl 3-5 sections a day.
Absolutely no need to rush. "We'll get done when we get done." I think that last is a quote from Michelangelo referring to the Sistine Chapel's ceiling.
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KevinS wrote: February 10th, 2021, 3:56 pm
adr6090 wrote: February 10th, 2021, 3:01 pm Wow Kevin,
Thank you for mentioning that there is no need to rush with this project.
Looks to me according to the mw, there is only 1 section left for you to record.
If time allows I am more than pleased to dpl 3-5 sections a day.
Absolutely no need to rush. "We'll get done when we get done." I think that last is a quote from Michelangelo referring to the Sistine Chapel's ceiling.
Thank you for that quote, I wholeheartedly agree with it. :clap:
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Note for section 12;
I hear "a weak training effect" @ 1:31, it should be "a weak tanning effect"-please change.

Sections 08 & 13 are pl okay, good job!!
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Below are my morning pl's with no corrections needed, well read with my favorite being section 15 & your wonderful pronunciation of the slang words. :lol:

sections 3, 4, 14, 15 & 16 are all pl okay
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adr6090 wrote: February 26th, 2021, 8:50 am Below are my morning pl's with no corrections needed, well read with my favorite being section 15 & your wonderful pronunciation of the slang words. :lol:

sections 3, 4, 14, 15 & 16 are all pl okay
That Slang section was nearly impossible for me! Haha!
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