[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 05 - kit
-
- Posts: 28
- Joined: November 28th, 2020, 12:45 pm
- Location: Louisiana, USA
Can I claim section 8 please?
-Aidan "Evening Warmth"
hey Aidan, so cool you are not yet deterred by Rover stories looking forward to hearing this one, hopefully a bit less gloomy than Claude Gueux (which is hard to top for gloominess)
thank you
Sonia
the horror of those final moments ! Gives me a shudder. Although I somehow expected a Poe-esque Amontillado type of story, it's even more horrible that the man did it to himself. Quite a thrilling story. And wonderfully narrated, thank you so much, MikeMManolakes wrote: ↑January 24th, 2021, 8:02 amSection 4, duration 17:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0105_04_various_128kb.mp3
PL ok
Just as a personal note: 3 seconds before "end of section 4" felt quite too long for me as a listener. But there are no other errors, I don't think it matters much, so no need to reupload just for that.
Sonia
intense indeed, wow. A powerful story. And so it was all a dream or a hallucination, still that must feel awful when you think you are awake. And I didn't understand why he was covered in blood in the end That was not really explained.neecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 24th, 2021, 1:07 pmHere is 3--intense!
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0105_03_smith_128kb.mp3
Wonderfully narrated again, Jim, thank you so much. Totally PL ok.
Just a small note concerning the filename. I noticed that "various" is a better alternative for this project, so I changed it this time but no need to reupload, I'll correct it in my folder. Sorry for confusing you over two projects. The best is always to copy/paste the example in the first post, then you can't go wrong.
Sonia
-
- Posts: 12330
- Joined: April 4th, 2016, 4:52 pm
Sorry about that. I meant to differentiate, but apparently I second-guessed myself. Thanks for fixing. Jim
-
- Posts: 12330
- Joined: April 4th, 2016, 4:52 pm
Here is Section 5--once again a wonderful story with a tragic end .
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0105_05_various_128kb.mp3
20:39
Jim
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0105_05_various_128kb.mp3
20:39
Jim
indeed a tragic ending. Why oh why can they never take revenge on the guilty person ? If she must kill, why kill the innocent boy instead of the father, who was the cause of all trouble ?neecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 26th, 2021, 11:04 amHere is Section 5--once again a wonderful story with a tragic end .
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0105_05_various_128kb.mp3
Well...in any case, the story was flawlessly narrated and very nice to listen to. Thank you so much, Jim. Another PL ok section
Sonia
oh, thank you, Jim that means we are already fully claimed and move over to Readers found. (and I will probably launch a new Rover later today)
Sonia
-
- Posts: 12330
- Joined: April 4th, 2016, 4:52 pm
-
- Posts: 12330
- Joined: April 4th, 2016, 4:52 pm
Sonia, I have replaced the original 9 with a length of 2:48 with a new one with a length of 2:49. Does it automatically replace the former? Jim
thank you, Jim, what a lovely poem I enjoyed itneecheelok70 wrote: ↑January 28th, 2021, 7:22 amHere is Section 9:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0105_09_various_128kb.mp3
Could I just ask you to cut out the EJT at 2:39. I am not even sure these are the initials as they are unreadable for me I think we better leave them out. If I was sure that were the correct initials, I would have mentioned them right after the title like in the other stories where we know the author.
Thanks
Sonia