and thank you for these two poems as well, Tasha, so charmingly narrated.
Section 7 is already
PL ok but I have a couple of
notes for Section 2:
>
at 0:58: (p. 66) "of morning clouds and
cistus woodbine – I hear "
citrus", but here the flower is meant:
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/cistus
>
at the end you have
7 seconds of silence – please cut down to the
standard 5 seconds
> the
filename should contain double digits "
02" since we are having more than 9 sections in this project, we need the leading 0. Section 7 is also missing a 0 but since there were no other mistakes, I will change the filename in my folder, no need to re-upload that section. Only this one
Thanks
Sonia