COMPLETE The Storm Of London by Fernande Blaze de Bury - rap
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Chapter 13: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_13_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Time: 24:59
Thanks!
Time: 24:59
Thanks!
"The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents." - H.P. Lovecraft
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Andrew,OooThatsNifty wrote: ↑March 18th, 2021, 1:36 pm Chapter 13: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_13_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Time: 24:59
Thanks!
Very well read. Kept my interest. You only had one small slip that I think might be worth correcting:
18:28.5 breaking the hearts of these ungentle personages. You added 'in' after 'breaking”. A minor change, but I think it makes a difference.
Wayne
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Thanks for the kind words & quick PL! Here's the updated version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_13_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Time: 24:59 (Unchanged)
I originally recorded this last week, and my voice isn't quite in the same place tonight - hope it's not too noticeable, but if you find it distracting I don't mind giving it another try.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_13_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Time: 24:59 (Unchanged)
I originally recorded this last week, and my voice isn't quite in the same place tonight - hope it's not too noticeable, but if you find it distracting I don't mind giving it another try.
"The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents." - H.P. Lovecraft
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I know, I always have the same fear, but yours turned out great!!OooThatsNifty wrote: ↑March 18th, 2021, 6:46 pm Thanks for the kind words & quick PL! Here's the updated version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_13_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Time: 24:59 (Unchanged)
I originally recorded this last week, and my voice isn't quite in the same place tonight - hope it's not too noticeable, but if you find it distracting I don't mind giving it another try.
Chapter 13 PLOK .
Wayne
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Hello!!
I have finally recorded Chapter 12. It was really hard pronouncing some of the words and also the French! I tried my best but let me know if I need to fix anything!
Thanks
The length is 22:12
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_12_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
I have finally recorded Chapter 12. It was really hard pronouncing some of the words and also the French! I tried my best but let me know if I need to fix anything!
Thanks
The length is 22:12
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_12_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Huge thanks, Jane. As this is a clean up month, could you please complete chapter 14 by the end of next week? I am sorry for asking something dificalt but it is a clean up month and I want this pooject complete. Many people are making a huge effort oor it, not only me.
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Jane,JaneGrey17 wrote: ↑March 22nd, 2021, 2:55 pm Hello!!
I have finally recorded Chapter 12. It was really hard pronouncing some of the words and also the French! I tried my best but let me know if I need to fix anything!
Thanks
The length is 22:12
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_12_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Well done. There a very few places that you should go back and look at:
At the beginning, could you please cut the intro silence to between .5 and 1 second?
11:13 against plain facts being handed to me by unimaginative people I heard unimanginable.
15:06 for the invasion of American heiresses upon our Piccadilly shores I hear something like 'haires'.
20:23 we shall have to retreat ignominiously You said ignominisly You did very well on most of the words, even the French ones, but here is help on one of them: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/ignominious
One other small point. Your volume is 91.6, which is within specs for LV, however, since you will be in there anyway, could you drop the volume by maybe 2 dB? I have found it interesting that some readings at 91 'sound' just fine, while others 'sound' loud. Yours happens to be the latter, at least to my ear.
Keep up the good work, and did you see Stav's note on Chapter 14?
Wayne
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To kalamareader,
Thanks for the comments on what to edit. I will work on them tomorrow and I will also send in the recording for my last chapter as well.
Thanks!
Thanks for the comments on what to edit. I will work on them tomorrow and I will also send in the recording for my last chapter as well.
Thanks!
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I have edited Chapter 12 and I tried to fix the volume in the only way I know how! My checker said that it was at 88.1 dB and I tried to use the Loudness Normalization feature to fix the loud and quiet parts as well.
Here is the Chapter 12 link with the edits and the length is now at 22:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_12_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Also, here is the first recording for Chapter 14 (length) 16:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_14_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Thanks and have a great weekend!!
-Jane
Here is the Chapter 12 link with the edits and the length is now at 22:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_12_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Also, here is the first recording for Chapter 14 (length) 16:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/stormoflondon_14_blazedebury_128kb.mp3
Thanks and have a great weekend!!
-Jane