[solo] Global Trends 2030: Alternative Worlds by National Intelligence Council-dlo

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how can i get access to that to make changes?
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pmchaffie wrote: February 4th, 2021, 8:03 pm how can i get access to that to make changes?
You can not go back to the template, but you can edit the first post. The template has served its 2 purposes: 1) create the first post and 2) create initial entries into the database. You can edit the first post and I can edit the database so the template is no longer needed.

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thanks for your help. i think i got things cleaned up a bit - and figured out how to edit posts. this is terrifically empowering and makes me feel slightly like Winston Smith. if only i had this ability to work on my email over the last 40 years :lol:
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"War is God's way of teaching Americans geography."
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I have marked section 2 PL OK.

I would ask you to consider whether the shaded inset on page 11 about Muslim Women would make more sense before Roles of Communication Technologies than after.

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thank you david, i'll take a look at it and consider your suggestion.
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i made the change that you suggested and have replaced section 2 with the edited version in the uploader:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/alternativeworlds2030_02_nationalintelligencecouncil_128kb.mp3

44:40

thanks for the suggestion, i believe it does help the text. some of the choices made on placement of different components are a bit odd and i'm trying to do my best with them. near the end, i believe in section 13, there is an obvious error in the layout with a similar section and i plan to correct this as the reader. when there is an insert such as this i try to move it to a break between headings in the text. it does help having someone else looking at these and it's not difficult to make a change.
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Partick,

Revised section 2 is Spot Check PL OK.

Section 3 is PL OK.

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Section 4 is PL OK.
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Section 5 has a repeat @ 26:17.
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just getting back into this and noticed your pl note on sect 5. i'll take care of it and repost. many distractions.
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Section 5 is PL OK.
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