COMPLETE [Weekly Poetry] Grown-Up by Edna St. Vincent Millay - dl

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Post by caitlinvoiceactor » January 7th, 2021, 4:13 pm


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Post by desmarais » January 7th, 2021, 5:31 pm

aradlaw wrote:
January 6th, 2021, 7:43 pm
desmarais wrote:
January 6th, 2021, 6:27 pm
Revised version enclosed. Very open to criticisms as I'd like to make my contributions of a professional ilk. I would like to use the public name of Annette Desmarais (my late great-grandmother's name). https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/grownup_millay_ejf_128kb.mp3
Thank you Annette, unfortunately, the intro and outro are missing, you need to read everything in the tinted quote boxes, Don't forget the 5 seconds of ending silence.
Your catalog page has been updated with your display name. :wink:
:help: I am such a newbie that I am sure the problem is mine....I edited and resubmitted my submission based on this guidance: Post by aradlaw » January 4th, 2021, 8:40 pm
  • Welcome to Librivox Elina :D good first reading, just a few comments...
    - the specs are good,...
    - you only need to read the poem itself, just the text inside the quote boxes. (could you edit out the extra bits and upload, using the same filename, thanks)

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Post by mleigh » January 7th, 2021, 6:38 pm

Great poem.

Here is my version. Let me know of any problems and I'll make the tremendous effort to re-record it. :D

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/grownup_millay_mlm_128kb.mp3
0:34

Thanks,

M

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Post by aradlaw » January 7th, 2021, 9:10 pm

Thank you Garth, Lee, Gini, Caitlin and M. :thumbs:
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Post by aradlaw » January 10th, 2021, 8:20 am

This Weekly poem is now closed, thank you to all readers this week. :clap:

*desmarais, I edited your reading into the proper format. :wink:
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