COMPLETE [Weekly Poetry] Grown-Up by Edna St. Vincent Millay - dl

[caitlinvoiceactor]

Hah, too real.
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https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/grownup_millay_cb_128kb.mp3

[desmarais]

Revised version enclosed. Very open to criticisms as I'd like to make my contributions of a professional ilk. I would like to use the public name of Annette Desmarais (my late great-grandmother's name). https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/grownup_millay_ejf_128kb.mp3

Thank you Annette, unfortunately, the intro and outro are missing, you need to read everything in the tinted quote boxes, Don't forget the 5 seconds of ending silence.
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I am such a newbie that I am sure the problem is mine....I edited and resubmitted my submission based on this guidance: Post by aradlaw » January 4th, 2021, 8:40 pm

• Welcome to Librivox Elina good first reading, just a few comments...
  - the specs are good,...
  - you only need to read the poem itself, just the text inside the quote boxes. (could you edit out the extra bits and upload, using the same filename, thanks)

[mleigh]

Great poem.

Here is my version. Let me know of any problems and I'll make the tremendous effort to re-record it.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/grownup_millay_mlm_128kb.mp3
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Thanks,

M

[aradlaw]

Thank you Garth, Lee, Gini, Caitlin and M.

[aradlaw]

This Weekly poem is now closed, thank you to all readers this week.

*desmarais, I edited your reading into the proper format.