Thank you for your section and for completing your first recording. A few edits needed.
First, the recording should be in mono. This can be fixed in Audacity by splitting the stereo track to mono and then deleting one of the tracks.
For future recordings you can change your audacity setting from stereo to mono and record directly in mono
(0:24) missing line "Waiting the solace of the morning spears"
(0:38) misread line "The clouds are whiter than the heart can white" you read "The clouds are whiter than white"
At the end of the recording, please leave 5 seconds of silence, this recording has about 2.5
A.M.B.
Between illnesses, work, and vacation, May wasn't my best Librivox month. But I'm back and ready to do some more recording, editing, and PLing!