Complete[Ukrainian][SOLO] Ніч перед рождеством. Гоголь М.-ag

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TanG
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Post by TanG » December 30th, 2020, 7:10 pm

Two chapters %)
But I'm going to slow down with all these holidays .
By the way, Happy New Year!!!! :D
Tan.
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » December 30th, 2020, 10:03 pm

:clap: great progress
If no one shows up, I'll PL smth as soon as I can. Are you gonna finish reading before the 7th of Jan? :D

Happy New Year!
It was absolutely great to have you here on LV in 2020 :thumbs:
Hope you'll enjoy you LVing next year too :D

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 2nd, 2021, 7:12 pm

Hi!
PL notes for Sec 04.
I love your acting, чорт is my fave :D

Just small adjustments should be made. There are long pauses
@14:65 - there is no rule, but generally 1-1.2 sec is recomended silence here
@1:34 1 sec pause is to long for a place in the middle of a paragraph.

Otherwise, you read very well :thumbs:

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Post by TanG » January 3rd, 2021, 3:15 am

HannaPonomarenko wrote:
January 2nd, 2021, 7:12 pm
Hi!
PL notes for Sec 04.
I love your acting, чорт is my fave :D

Just small adjustments should be made. There are long pauses
@14:65 - there is no rule, but generally 1-1.2 sec is recomended silence here
@1:34 1 sec pause is to long for a place in the middle of a paragraph.

Otherwise, you read very well :thumbs:
Hello, thank you a lot for staying with me =)
the adjusted file is here
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/nichperedrozhdestvom_04_gogol_128kb.mp3
I couldn't find the 14:65 pause as the file is slightly shorter, so I tried to cut any long pauses I could find.
You really gave me the boost to move on to another chapter :9:
Tan.
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 3rd, 2021, 6:04 am

TanG wrote:
January 3rd, 2021, 3:15 am

I couldn't find the 14:65 pause as the file is slightly shorter, so I tried to cut any long pauses I could find.
You really gave me the boost to move on to another chapter :9:
Tan.
Tan, I'm so sorry, I gave you such a hard time.
@14:65 - there is no rule, but generally 1-1.2 sec is recomended silence here

should have been written as
@0:14.65 - there is no rule, but generally 1-1.2 sec is recomended silence here

The new file has the same issue.

PLing too late at night :oops:
You really gave me the boost to move on to another chapter :9:


I'm glad to hear that.

Thank you

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Post by TanG » January 3rd, 2021, 8:07 am

HannaPonomarenko wrote:
January 3rd, 2021, 6:04 am
should have been written as
@0:14.65 - there is no rule, but generally 1-1.2 sec is recomended silence here

The new file has the same issue.

PLing too late at night :oops:
Oh, now I really hear that silence. This time it IS cut :oops:
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/nichperedrozhdestvom_04_gogol_128kb.mp3
Thank you!
Tan.
Readers and Listeners Wanted: [Open][Ukrainian] Українські народні казки. В. Гнатюк, І. Рудченко.
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 3rd, 2021, 8:31 am

TanG wrote:
January 3rd, 2021, 8:07 am

Oh, now I really hear that silence. This time it IS cut :oops:
PL OK!

Thanks)

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Post by TanG » January 3rd, 2021, 9:35 am

Another part is here 8-)
Thanks,
Tan
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 3rd, 2021, 5:43 pm

Hi again)
Sec 5 PL OK :thumbs:
@5:14 I hear Кумова, I see Чубова but you've corrected a small mistake/typo, so good job!
I personally like your acting and Кумова жiнка made me laugh)

Thank you!

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Post by TanG » January 4th, 2021, 4:49 am

HannaPonomarenko wrote:
January 3rd, 2021, 5:43 pm
Hi again)
Sec 5 PL OK :thumbs:
@5:14 I hear Кумова, I see Чубова but you've corrected a small mistake/typo, so good job!
I personally like your acting and Кумова жiнка made me laugh)

Thank you!
Thank you!
I'm having fan trying to make them "speak", and now I know at least one person who likes it 8-)
You are space rocketing my self-esteem :9:
Thanks,
Tan.
P.S. Maybe we should appoint you DPL? or Would it be too much pressure for you?
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 4th, 2021, 6:33 pm

Hi!
Sec 02 PL notes:
The most important one is you need to do leveling. Please compare the volume level at the beginning of your recording and at the end. Оксана is too loud as well as some other places that you can see at Db diagram. We need the volume to be more even.

There are some mispronounced words:
0:02 Миколя
3:03 бик instead of бiк
7:09 чув instead of Чуб
10:32 добрий чоловiй I see чоловiк
13:54 счуб
16:09 черевекiв
16:35 карасавицю

Otherwise, well done)

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Post by TanG » January 5th, 2021, 2:26 pm

HannaPonomarenko wrote:
January 4th, 2021, 6:33 pm
Hi!
Sec 02 PL notes:
The most important one is you need to do leveling. Please compare the volume level at the beginning of your recording and at the end. Оксана is too loud as well as some other places that you can see at Db diagram. We need the volume to be more even.
Hello!
Well, actually the "tail"= part [14:05; to the end] was rerecorded and added to the main part later due to some sound problem in the first recording. I tried to make it's level as close to the existing part as I could( the main part is 90,2dB, the tail 91,8dB ), however if the difference is so annoying I'll try to make the gap smaller. Also, before changing anything I need to know if there should be changes only to Oksana's volume in the added part, or to some other in the whole chapter, just to know the amount of work before me.
Besides, leveling WAS applied after putting everything together, maybe I'm doing something wrong with it...
HannaPonomarenko wrote:
January 4th, 2021, 6:33 pm
There are some mispronounced words:
0:02 Миколя
3:03 бик instead of бiк
7:09 чув instead of Чуб
10:32 добрий чоловiй I see чоловiк
13:54 счуб
16:09 черевекiв
16:35 карасавицю
Thank you for your hard work!
I wouldn't be able to make recordings for few days, but I'll be back as soon as I can.
Thanks,
Tan.
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 5th, 2021, 4:59 pm

TanG wrote:
January 5th, 2021, 2:26 pm

Well, actually the "tail"= part [14:05; to the end] was rerecorded and added to the main part later due to some sound problem in the first recording. I tried to make it's level as close to the existing part as I could( the main part is 90,2dB, the tail 91,8dB ), however if the difference is so annoying I'll try to make the gap smaller.
I'm sorry to say, but yes, I find that the tail is too loud.
Also, before changing anything I need to know if there should be changes only to Oksana's volume in the added part, or to some other in the whole chapter, just to know the amount of work before me.
If I'm not mistaking Oksana strats to speak at 15:39 "Е Одарко!" she is too loud from this moment up to the end.
Besides, leveling WAS applied after putting everything together, maybe I'm doing something wrong with it...
I've never done this mylelf. I would reach out Kazbek if I were you and stuck with this issue.

One of my DPL projects is coming back to life, so I'll try to PL Sec 1 and then may be also not available for long.

Thanks for your time and passion :thumbs:

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » January 5th, 2021, 6:28 pm

Sec 1 PL notes.
The start is very engaging :thumbs:
There are some points we need to address
  • There are some long pauses:
    @0:19 long pause 1,7sec
    @8:15 long pause 2sec
    @16:38 too long pause in the middle of the paragpaph
  • We have a mispronounced word
    9:12 рiвнодишнiстю
    but in general you've done a very good job reading such a complicated spelling :clap:
  • Starting at 13:22 and up to the end the volume jumps from high voice of Oksana and low one of Vakula. It's inconveinient to hear. I suggest leveling this part.
Thank you!

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Post by TanG » January 8th, 2021, 9:31 am

HannaPonomarenko wrote:
January 4th, 2021, 6:33 pm
Hi!
Sec 02 PL notes:
The most important one is you need to do leveling. Please compare the volume level at the beginning of your recording and at the end. Оксана is too loud as well as some other places that you can see at Db diagram. We need the volume to be more even.

There are some mispronounced words:
0:02 Миколя
3:03 бик instead of бiк
7:09 чув instead of Чуб
10:32 добрий чоловiй I see чоловiк
13:54 счуб
16:09 черевекiв
16:35 карасавицю
Hello
Here is the edited sec 02
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/nichperedrozhdestvom_02_gogol_128kb.mp3
Please, tell me if the sound is better, I tried some new effects, but I listened to it so much that I can't tell if there is a difference
Thanks,
Tan.
Merry Christmas to you!!!
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