COMPLETE: The Roswell Report: Case Closed by James McAndrew - jo

aeb2468 wrote: ↑January 30th, 2021, 10:08 am Back at it!

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Just to verify, the 'Summary' that follows "Bodies with Large Heads and Wright-Patterson AFB Ohio" is purposefully excluded? Thanks.

DOLZ · Post by **DOLZ** » February 6th, 2021, 3:52 pm

aeb2468 wrote: ↑February 1st, 2021, 1:42 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/roswellrptcaseclosed_10_mcandrew_128kb.mp3 (26.35.85)

Please feel free to correct me if I misunderstand the proofreading guidelines. In Section 8, 'Bodies with Large Heads...." the name 'Stapp' - referring to Col (Dr) John Stapp (clarified in Section 10) - was correctly pronounced as 'Stapp'. In Section 10, witness statement for Charles A Coltman, Jr, 4th paragraph, third sentence is read as follows: "I remember receiving a call from Col (Dr) John Strapp." with an 'r'. This pronunciation was repeated in the 4th sentence. I am not confident that this is really an issue. Thanks.

DOLZ · Post by **DOLZ** » February 6th, 2021, 4:57 pm

I'm going to pick back up with Appendix C tomorrow. So sorry I wasn't able to complete all proof readings today. Thanks.

aeb2468 · Post by **aeb2468** » February 7th, 2021, 7:52 am

DOLZ wrote: ↑February 6th, 2021, 2:56 pm
aeb2468 wrote: ↑January 30th, 2021, 10:08 am Back at it!

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/roswellrptcaseclosed_08_mcandrew_128kb.mp3 (18.51.23)

Just to verify, the 'Summary' that follows "Bodies with Large Heads and Wright-Patterson AFB Ohio" is purposefully excluded? Thanks.

No, that's a great catch. That paragraph has been added and below is the updated file. I also replaced the file in the magic window

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/roswellrptcaseclosed_08_mcandrew_128kb.mp3 (19.38.59)

aeb2468 · Post by **aeb2468** » February 7th, 2021, 8:21 am

DOLZ wrote: ↑February 6th, 2021, 3:52 pm
aeb2468 wrote: ↑February 1st, 2021, 1:42 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/roswellrptcaseclosed_10_mcandrew_128kb.mp3 (26.35.85)
Please feel free to correct me if I misunderstand the proofreading guidelines. In Section 8, 'Bodies with Large Heads...." the name 'Stapp' - referring to Col (Dr) John Stapp (clarified in Section 10) - was correctly pronounced as 'Stapp'. In Section 10, witness statement for Charles A Coltman, Jr, 4th paragraph, third sentence is read as follows: "I remember receiving a call from Col (Dr) John Strapp." with an 'r'. This pronunciation was repeated in the 4th sentence. I am not confident that this is really an issue. Thanks.

Another great catch. Updated file is below and attached to the Magic Window

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/roswellrptcaseclosed_10_mcandrew_128kb.mp3 (26.36.13)

aeb2468 · Post by **aeb2468** » February 8th, 2021, 4:49 pm

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aeb2468 · Post by **aeb2468** » February 10th, 2021, 1:37 pm

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DOLZ · Post by **DOLZ** » February 11th, 2021, 11:02 am

Done. Thank you for the opportunity to share this project. It was a fun, first project.

aeb2468 · Post by **aeb2468** » February 11th, 2021, 11:06 am

DOLZ wrote: ↑February 11th, 2021, 11:02 am Done. Thank you for the opportunity to share this project. It was a fun, first project.

Awesome! Thanks for your efforts. It was my first solo and I enjoyed working with you.