COMPLETE[PLAY]The Perjur'd Husband by Centlivre - thw
And Act 4 is also ready.
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
thank you, all good and PL ok now. You've mastered your first stage directionsTheIntern356 wrote: ↑January 3rd, 2021, 7:56 am And there we go
Stage Directions Act 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3
9:31.27
Sonia
I was curious about that seduction scene...it sounds wonderfully steamy indeed. And the other two dialogues (Alonzo/Bassino and Lucy/Pizalto) are also very entertaining. I enjoyed the whole act very much.
Now I need breakfast after this...
Oh there is a bit of a mix up at the end, which needs to be corrected:
> at 21:15: you forgot "Alonzo, aside" right before "then I am happy". I'm sure he would not say this aloud to the remark done by Bassino that his misfortunes are in Turin.
> at 21:32: after "exit Alonzo" - this "aside" can be cut here, no need to speak as aside since he is alone in the room at this point. Maybe this aside was the one that was missing right before and you put it on the wrong spot by mistake
> at 21:40: missed line: "exit Bassino"
thanks
Sonia
ok I was too curious still, so breakfast had to wait...
A wonderful act as well, a bit more dramatic still than the previous one. The scene with Placentia and Alonzo and Bassino is great and then the almost slapstick scene with the crossdressing lover is a comic relief somehow.
Wonderfully edited again, thank you Todd !
Just one small correction to suggest:
> at 7:41: "Bassino, aside" - I think we need to include the "aside" already at the beginning. Bassino would surely make no mention of his hypocrisy aloud
> at 7:48: so here "aside" can get cut
thanks (and now definitely breakfast...)
Sonia
Changes to both acts made as suggested; ready for spot PL.
Thanks!
Todd
Thanks!
Todd
-Jenn B.
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Thank you.
Todd
Todd
high dramatic, big emotions. if Aurelia is like this in the first act, I dread how she will escalate in the final acts excellently done, Jenn, thanks ! Straight PL ok.jennlea wrote: ↑January 10th, 2021, 7:52 amHere is Act 1 of Aurelia:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_1_128kb.mp3
Sonia
And here are Acts 3 and 5 of Aurelia:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_5_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_5_128kb.mp3
-Jenn B.
My Recordings
My Recordings
I always find it amazing how long the people still speak on stage after they have been stabbed to death you had a great dying scene here, excellently done, Jenjennlea wrote: ↑January 12th, 2021, 6:00 pmAnd here are Acts 3 and 5 of Aurelia:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_5_128kb.mp3
Act 3 is PL ok.
One missed bit for Act 5 though:
> at 0:10: "How tedious are thy minutes when cruel absence parts"
thanks
Sonia
Thanks, Sonia! Funny story, I already had to re-record that line in Act 5 because while editing I discovered I said 'absent' instead of 'absence'. Apparently I then left out the first part of that lineKitty wrote: ↑January 13th, 2021, 3:01 am I always find it amazing how long the people still speak on stage after they have been stabbed to death you had a great dying scene here, excellently done, Jen
Act 3 is PL ok.
One missed bit for Act 5 though:
> at 0:10: "How tedious are thy minutes when cruel absence parts"
Oh well! Should be fixed now. I actually had the first half of the line still in the original recording so I just stitched it together. Let me know if it isn't a smooth join.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_5_128kb.mp3
-Jenn B.
My Recordings
My Recordings
Thank you.
Todd
Todd