Around 1:52/53 there is kind of a repeat? it sounds like you corrected something but didn't quite delete all of the part you corrected. Take a listen and you will see what i mean
At around 3:43 there is a stumble on 'in the midst of love'
At 4:22 the end of 'Sometimes it is worse than this.' appears to be cut off and merges a little with the next line.
At 4:21 could you please re-do this line 'Yes, woman has laid upon her the sacred necessity of seriousness in all that is connected with Love.' as you stutter on the word 'seriousness' and then there is a bit of a pause.
ashleighjane wrote: ↑December 19th, 2020, 9:51 am
PL notes for Chapter 20:
Around 1:52/53 there is kind of a repeat? it sounds like you corrected something but didn't quite delete all of the part you corrected. Take a listen and you will see what i mean
At around 3:43 there is a stumble on 'in the midst of love'
At 4:22 the end of 'Sometimes it is worse than this.' appears to be cut off and merges a little with the next line.
At 4:21 could you please re-do this line 'Yes, woman has laid upon her the sacred necessity of seriousness in all that is connected with Love.' as you stutter on the word 'seriousness' and then there is a bit of a pause.
3:10 There is a bit of a stutter here a 'there would much less sentimentality, but much deeper feeling about marriage.' should be 'there would be much less sentimentality, but much deeper feeling about marriage.
7.27 There is a stutter towards the end of this sentence 'And love between men and women implies duties and responsibilities that go out beyond themselves;' and the end of 'themselves' seems to be cut off.
9.41 'All the evil in marriage? is due to too large families' the word 'is' has been cut out.
at 10:48 'This problem of Passionate Friendships, like all problems of sexual conduct, demands something more than emotional treatment; it requires the most careful consideration of many different sets of facts, that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is repeated. Before it, 'that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is missing.
I have sent abby a private message to let her know that i will orphan her chapters if I haven't heard from her by 5th January. Ordinarily, I would wait until the two months deadline was up but have decided to give a month in this instance seeing as the project is moving fairly quickly and abby does not appear to be active on the forum.
at 10:48 'This problem of Passionate Friendships, like all problems of sexual conduct, demands something more than emotional treatment; it requires the most careful consideration of many different sets of facts, that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is repeated. Before it, 'that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is missing.
Oops... I missed clipping that first section out. Thank you
I hope you won't have to listen to it all over again This was a long one.
If it's helpful... the 10:48 passage you noted now occurs at 10:35 with the repeated section removed.
Don't worry, we all make errors sometimes. That's what pling is there for 
This was a long one.