[COMPLETE] La Hija del Adelantado by José Milla y Vidaurri - availle

rachelmoraes · Post by **rachelmoraes** » November 23rd, 2020, 6:47 pm

Hi Availle and Mario.

Capitulo I - PL OK, but Mario, you need to correct the time in the MW. It should be 17:12 and not 37:12

Capitulo II - PL OK - perfect

Mario, you have such a nice voice, deep and clear, easy to hear. And the story promises to be good. Happy to work with you both. Thanks

Rachel

rachelmoraes · Post by **rachelmoraes** » November 24th, 2020, 11:48 am

Holla Mario

Capitulo III is almost perfect but for a minor mistake. You said at 5:22: "era nuestro amigo conocido", when it's written "era nuestro antiguo conocido". If you could change just the word, it would be great

Rachel

rachelmoraes · Post by **rachelmoraes** » November 24th, 2020, 12:19 pm

Hi Mario

Capitulo IV PL OK - perfect

Rachel

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » November 25th, 2020, 7:30 am

rachelmoraes wrote: ↑
November 23rd, 2020, 6:47 pm
Hi Availle and Mario.

Capitulo I - PL OK, but Mario, you need to correct the time in the MW. It should be 17:12 and not 37:12

Capitulo II - PL OK - perfect

Mario, you have such a nice voice, deep and clear, easy to hear. And the story promises to be good. Happy to work with you both. Thanks

Rachel

Hi Rachel, very fast review - I am happy you're dye DPL! I have corrected the time for Capítulo 1, and thank you very much for the comments.

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » November 25th, 2020, 7:32 am

rachelmoraes wrote: ↑
November 24th, 2020, 11:48 am
Holla Mario

Capitulo III is almost perfect but for a minor mistake. You said at 5:22: "era nuestro amigo conocido", when it's written "era nuestro antiguo conocido". If you could change just the word, it would be great

Rachel

Hello Rachel, good catch! I've corrected the file, and re-uploaded it here: https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_03_jil_128kb.mp3
Recording time stayed the same, at 18'52", and it's now ready for Spot PL.

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » November 25th, 2020, 8:32 pm

Hi Rachel and Availle, here is the recording for Capítulo 5, at 15'56": https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_05_jil_128kb.mp3
Thanks and regards.

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » November 25th, 2020, 8:33 pm

Hi Rachel and Availle, and also available for PL is Capítulo 6, at 15'29": https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_06_jil_128kb.mp3
Thanks and regards.

rachelmoraes · Post by **rachelmoraes** » November 26th, 2020, 6:55 pm

Hello there

Capitulo III - PL OK

Capitulo V - perfect, PL OK

Capitulo VI - Almost perfect. At 9:55 you said "Por indisposición del Adelantado". But it's written "Por interposición del Adelantado. Everything else is OK.

Rachel

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » November 27th, 2020, 9:51 am

Hi Rachel, Capítulo 6 has been corrected, and is ready for Spot PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_06_jil_128kb.mp3

Capítulo 7, at 16'36", is now ready for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_07_jil_128kb.mp3

Thanks.

rachelmoraes · Post by **rachelmoraes** » November 30th, 2020, 9:37 am

Hello Availle, hello Mario.

Capitulo VI OK

Capitulo VII OK, but you should have a look (a hearing, I mean) at 6:14, There is a strange noise, that sounds like remains of something deleted, erased.

The story is getting every moment more and more interresting with all these palatial intrigues

Rachel

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » December 1st, 2020, 10:42 am

Hi Rachel, I have corrected the sound on Capítulo 7, at the 6:10 mark. The total time remained the same at 16:36. Revised file link: https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_07_jil_128kb.mp3

I agree with you that the intrigues and developments keep you glued to the story. More chapters coming in soon...

Regards.

rachelmoraes · Post by **rachelmoraes** » December 3rd, 2020, 6:24 pm

Hi Mario.

It's perfect now. Already PL OK

Rachel

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » December 3rd, 2020, 7:53 pm

Hi Rachel, great timing, as I was just uploading two new chapters:

Capítulo 8, at 16'56": https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_08_jil_128kb.mp3

Capítulo 9, at 17'34": https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_09_jil_128kb.mp3

Out of curiosity, do you read chapters not yet recorded to get ahead in the story, or do you wait until recordings are posted?

Happy listening!

rachelmoraes · Post by **rachelmoraes** » December 5th, 2020, 12:42 pm

Hi Availle, hi Mario.

Mario, I do not read the chapters not yet recorded. I just want to be surprised by your narration, even
when I'm very much provoked to read forward, as in Chapter IX:"Dejaremos para otro capítulo la conversacion de aquellos personages"

Capitulo VIII – PL OK

Capitulo IX – 0:35 – Missing the word “guerreros” – Puede contarse con unos cincuenta mil guerreros, y

What a intriguing story. And historically precious. I don’t know how it's in Mexico and Centro- American countries, but in Brasil, no one knows, but slightly - it is not a subject for Education! - about the ancient nations and their history before or after the arrival of Spaniards and Portugueses in these territories

Rachel

mpinedag · Post by **mpinedag** » December 6th, 2020, 8:43 pm

Hi Rachel, the surprises keep coming in... It's a story that have so many unexpected twists.
I have have been exposed to history education in Mexico and in the U.S., and the coverage of the subject varies wildly depending on the geographical area where you live. The arrival of Columbus and the Spaniards, although celebrated still and mostly studied in Elementary schools, is subject to much criticism. Stories like this one help us gain a better understanding of the situations experienced by those who lived in those ages.

Thanks for catching the mistake on Capítulo 9 at 0:35 - I have corrected it, and the file is ready for Spot PL. Recording time is now 17:35, and the file is here: https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_09_jil_128kb.mp3

Also ready for your review is Capítulo X, recorded at 15:41: https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_10_jil_128kb.mp3

And one more: Capítulo XI, recorded at 16:39: https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/hijaadelantado_11_jil_128kb.mp3

Regards.