COMPLETE [SOLO]A Broken Bond by Nicholas Carter-mas
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Hello Geoff,
Chapters 15-17 are PL Okay.
Lora
Chapters 15-17 are PL Okay.
Lora
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The plot thickens..... PL Okay for chapter 18.
L.
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Geoff,
PL Okay for all three chapters, though you might want to make a correction in chapter 20 at 5:55. "wouldn't" should be changed to "would" in the phrase "They-they would send me to the chair..."
Thank you,
Lora
PL Okay for all three chapters, though you might want to make a correction in chapter 20 at 5:55. "wouldn't" should be changed to "would" in the phrase "They-they would send me to the chair..."
Thank you,
Lora
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The fix sounds great. L.
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Geoff,
PL Okay for chapters 22-24.
Lora
PL Okay for chapters 22-24.
Lora
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Hi Geoff,
PL Okay for Chapters 25, 27 and 28. For some reason, I cannot open the file for chapter 26. I'm not sure what's wrong, but if you could look at it, I'd appreciate it.
Thanks,
Lora
PL Okay for Chapters 25, 27 and 28. For some reason, I cannot open the file for chapter 26. I'm not sure what's wrong, but if you could look at it, I'd appreciate it.
Thanks,
Lora
Hi Lora,ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑January 25th, 2021, 2:55 pm Hi Geoff,
PL Okay for Chapters 25, 27 and 28. For some reason, I cannot open the file for chapter 26. I'm not sure what's wrong, but if you could look at it, I'd appreciate it.
Thanks,
Lora
When I uploaded them I did them in altogether , something must have gone wrong with 26. I have uploaded it again so hopefully you will not have any more issues with it.