COMPLETE [SOLO]A Broken Bond by Nicholas Carter-mas

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 3rd, 2020, 12:12 pm

Geoff--PL Okay on Chapter 8. Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » December 4th, 2020, 4:24 am

Hi Lora,
Please find chapter 9 ready for PL.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 4th, 2020, 5:46 pm

Geoff,
Chapter 9 is PL Okay.

Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » December 8th, 2020, 2:05 am

Hi Lora,
Chapter 10 ready for PL

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 9th, 2020, 1:53 pm

Hello Geoff,
For Chapter 10, at 1:11 "He had" should be changed to read "Had he" in the phrase "Had he been able to do so..." At 5:26, "vanishing" should be "vanished" in "...the vanished number from..."

Thank you,
Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » December 10th, 2020, 1:33 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑December 9th, 2020, 1:53 pm Hello Geoff,
For Chapter 10, at 1:11 "He had" should be changed to read "Had he" in the phrase "Had he been able to do so..." At 5:26, "vanishing" should be "vanished" in "...the vanished number from..."

Thank you,
Lora

Hi Lora,
Thanks for picking these up. The silly thing was the second one I re did because I said 'numbers' but then got vanished wrong.

New file uploaded ready for PL

I am helping someone else out on another project so might be a bit longer between uploads.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 12th, 2020, 12:45 pm

Hi--
Chapter 10 is PL Okay. I'll check back to see the next posting--good luck on your other project.

Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » December 12th, 2020, 8:14 pm

Hi Lora,
Chapter 11 is ready for PL.

I was able to get this one done and another one in the other project.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 13th, 2020, 1:07 pm

Hello Geoff,
PL notes for chapter 11; please review to make sure I am correct. At 1:04, there seems to be a typo in the text. Instead of "...rang put anew." it should be "...rang out anew." At 1:28, change "thoughtfully" to "thoroughly" in "...unusual, but thoroughly characteristic way." And at 2:02, "board" should be "broad" in "...down the broad corridor."

Thank you,
Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » December 16th, 2020, 3:19 am

ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑December 13th, 2020, 1:07 pm Hello Geoff,
PL notes for chapter 11; please review to make sure I am correct. At 1:04, there seems to be a typo in the text. Instead of "...rang put anew." it should be "...rang out anew." At 1:28, change "thoughtfully" to "thoroughly" in "...unusual, but thoroughly characteristic way." And at 2:02, "board" should be "broad" in "...down the broad corridor."

Thank you,
Lora

Hi Lora,
Thanks for the corrections, I thought 1:04 didn't sound right and the other two are just me not ready correctly . I have made the changes and the updated file is uploaded and ready for spot pl.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 16th, 2020, 9:24 am

All set, Geoff, on chapter 11.
Thanks,
L.

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » December 19th, 2020, 4:26 am

Hi Lora,
Please find Chapter 12 now ready for PL.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 20th, 2020, 3:05 pm

Hello Geoff,
Chapter 12 is PL Okay.

Lora

geoffbl · Post by **geoffbl** » December 23rd, 2020, 3:56 am

Hi Lora,
Chapter 13 and 14 are ready for PL

I hope you have a nice Christmas and a happy new year.

ADKreader1122 · Post by **ADKreader1122** » December 27th, 2020, 6:03 pm

Thanks, Geoff, I think we're all hoping for a brighter year in 2021!

I've marked both chapters 13 and 14 PL Okay. There is one very small thing to clarify meaning in chapter 13 at the :29 mark. The word "he" should be omitted in "...of the same day that had witnessed..."

Lora