COMPLETE [SOLO]A Broken Bond by Nicholas Carter-mas
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Thank you, Geoff--PL Okay for Chapter 26.
Lora
Lora
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Hi Geoff,
I've marked chapters 29 and 30 as PL Okay, but there are a few small notes. In chapter 29 at 4:29 the word should be "inducing" instead of "including" in "...found no trouble in inducing Patsy..."
In chapter 30 at 3:47 the phrase should read "...would be running about most of the day." At 6:29 the sentence should be "...with a quick plunge thrown in."
Lora
I've marked chapters 29 and 30 as PL Okay, but there are a few small notes. In chapter 29 at 4:29 the word should be "inducing" instead of "including" in "...found no trouble in inducing Patsy..."
In chapter 30 at 3:47 the phrase should read "...would be running about most of the day." At 6:29 the sentence should be "...with a quick plunge thrown in."
Lora
Hi Lora,ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑February 4th, 2021, 1:58 pm Hi Geoff,
I've marked chapters 29 and 30 as PL Okay, but there are a few small notes. In chapter 29 at 4:29 the word should be "inducing" instead of "including" in "...found no trouble in inducing Patsy..."
In chapter 30 at 3:47 the phrase should read "...would be running about most of the day." At 6:29 the sentence should be "...with a quick plunge thrown in."
Lora
I have fixed both of those up and uploaded the updated files.
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Thanks, Geoff.
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PL Okay for chapters 31 and 32.
L.
L.
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Just a note to let everyone know that will be away from home this week and will get to the PL project duties as soon as I can. Thanks for understanding.
Lora
Lora
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Geoff,
Chapters 33 and 34 are PL Okay.
Thanks,
Lora
Chapters 33 and 34 are PL Okay.
Thanks,
Lora
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Chapter 35 is PL Okay, Geoff.
L.
L.