COMPLETE [Fortnightly Poetry] The Ship by Henry Lawson - dl

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Post by aradlaw » November 4th, 2020, 7:33 pm

sophiaboydd wrote:
November 4th, 2020, 4:00 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/ship_lawson_sb_128kb.mp3

By Sophie Boyd

2:45
Welcome to LibriVox Sophie :D, good first reading. :thumbs:
There are a few comments...
- the bitrate for your file is 115 kbps (variable), we need a bitrate or 128 kbps (constant) this is set when you save/export as an mp3
- there should be 5 seconds at the end of the recording
- at 1:06 I hear "The world may yet behold the day she’ll sail up the seas once more." the text reads "The world may yet behold the day she’ll sail the seas once more."
- at 2:21 I hear "..and now the Sister's Nations wade" text reads "..and now the Sister Nations wade" (we strife for wordperfect in poetry)
Could you please make these changes and upload, using the same filename?

*Please let me know under what name would you like to appear in the LV catalog and if you have one, we can put your personal URL link on your catalog page too.
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Post by pschempf » November 7th, 2020, 6:18 pm

Hi David -

A dark poem from the middle of the war to end all wars....and then it got worse.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/ship_lawson_ps_128kb.mp3
Track length: 3:10
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Post by Seawolf4 » November 7th, 2020, 9:58 pm


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Post by megbernardo » November 7th, 2020, 10:38 pm

Hi, here's my recording https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/ship_lawson_mb_128kb.mp3 3:38

I'd like to be credited as Meg Bernardo. Thanks! It was a good poem.

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Post by aradlaw » November 9th, 2020, 6:06 pm

Seawolf4 wrote:
November 7th, 2020, 9:58 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/ship_lawson_eric_128kb.mp3
3:06 Seawolf
Thank you Seawolf, there are a few misreads you may wish to correct -
- at 1:47 is read ”We robbed the water and the sky to give us “energy,” the text reads We robbed the water and the air to give us “energy,”
- at 2:28 is read "We sought to know all things and make all things ** Thou hast made!"; the text reads We sought to know all things and make all things that Thou hast made!
- at 2:48 is read "Knee-deep in white man’s blood to wreck all things ** we have made!"; the text reads"Knee-deep in white man’s blood to wreck all things that we have made!"
- an ending silence of 5 seconds is required

Please upload corrections using the same filename. Thanks.
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Post by aradlaw » November 9th, 2020, 6:18 pm

Thank you Phil and Meg. :thumbs:

Meg, you can view your catalog page here https://librivox.org/reader/15198
or by clicking on your forum name in the Magic Window. :wink:
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Post by Seawolf4 » November 9th, 2020, 8:23 pm


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Post by aradlaw » November 10th, 2020, 1:35 pm

Thank you for the edits Seawolk. :thumbs:
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Post by OooThatsNifty » November 13th, 2020, 9:45 pm

Hello! Here's my submission:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/ship_lawson_ag_128kb.mp3
Time: 2:54

Thanks!
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Post by aradlaw » November 14th, 2020, 8:07 am

Thank you Andrew. :thumbs:
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Post by aradlaw » November 15th, 2020, 9:17 am

Thank you to all readers of this Fortnightly Poem.

This project is now complete!
All audio files can be found on our catalog page:
https://librivox.org/the-ship-by-henry-lawson/
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