COMPLETE: SOLO 'Sylvie and Bruno' by Lewis Carroll - lny

linny · Post by **linny** » January 3rd, 2021, 8:28 am

Chapter 20:
15:57 – optional word change – But anything, involving a collision of minds only, would be possible in our ideal world-- for of course we must allow mental powers to all, irrespective of size.
Recorded as possibly

linny · Post by **linny** » January 3rd, 2021, 9:15 am

Chapter 21
13:59 missing text – “Mine foot’s come hurted again!” Bruno mournfully replied. And he sat down on the ground, and began nursing it.

16:47 optional word change – And as we stood, hand-in-hand, looking down at the dead hare, I tried to put the thing into such words as she could understand.
Recorded as stopped

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » January 3rd, 2021, 9:34 am

Chapter 23 and 24 up. Chapter 20 corrected.

Cheers

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » January 3rd, 2021, 9:41 am

Chapter 21 corrected and uploaded.

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linny · Post by **linny** » January 3rd, 2021, 9:46 am

Chapter 22
11:42 optional word change – “For any one with true dramatic instincts, it is only the Overture that is ended!
Recorded as insights

linny · Post by **linny** » January 3rd, 2021, 9:51 am

Chapters 20 and 21 are spot check PL OK.

linny · Post by **linny** » January 3rd, 2021, 10:19 am

Chapter 23
6:59 missing text – The ordinary course of events—first, to think nothing about me; then, hearing my footsteps to look up and see me;…

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » January 3rd, 2021, 10:49 am

linny wrote: ↑January 3rd, 2021, 9:51 am Chapters 20 and 21 are spot check PL OK.

Volume on 24 is low at 85.5dB. I haven't PLed it yet.

Let me look at 24 and adjust. Something peculiar happened half way through.

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linny · Post by **linny** » January 3rd, 2021, 10:52 am

Only correction for chapter 24 is the volume. Other than that it's PL OK.

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » January 4th, 2021, 10:56 am

22 and 23 adjusted.
Volume changed on 24.
25 and 26 uploaded.

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linny · Post by **linny** » January 4th, 2021, 2:23 pm

22, 23, and 24 are all spot check PL OK.

After reading the preface are you still happy with it being the final instead of the first section?

Any changes needed to the summary or keywords?

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » January 4th, 2021, 2:27 pm

linny wrote: ↑January 4th, 2021, 2:23 pm 22, 23, and 24 are all spot check PL OK.

After reading the preface are you still happy with it being the final instead of the first section?

Any changes needed to the summary or keywords?

I think it should be before if that's not a problem. It does explain some important parts of the book.

Cheers

linny · Post by **linny** » January 4th, 2021, 2:42 pm

Chapter 25
14:35 missing text – ”All that is evil, and dead, and hopeless, fading with the Night that is past!

Chapter 25 will also need the book ending.

linny · Post by **linny** » January 4th, 2021, 2:43 pm

Craigos wrote: ↑January 4th, 2021, 2:27 pm I think it should be before if that's not a problem. It does explain some important parts of the book.

Cheers

Not a problem at all.

Did you still want to do a scan of the illustrations to be attached to the catalog page?

Craigos · Post by **Craigos** » January 4th, 2021, 2:54 pm

I've got the illustrations via Wikimedia Commons

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Sylvie_and_Bruno

I guess we could just include a link, or I can download and put in a separate file. Just let me k ow what you think is the best way to do it.

We are just to about another National lockdown, so I think I am going to have more time than I anticpated.

Cheers