COMPLETE [Fortnightly Poetry] The Rain by Madison Cawein - dl

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Post by aradlaw » September 29th, 2020, 8:42 am

Thank you Bruce. :thumbs:
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Post by silverquill » September 30th, 2020, 8:45 am

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Post by aradlaw » September 30th, 2020, 9:23 am

Thank you Larry. :thumbs:
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Post by aradlaw » September 30th, 2020, 1:17 pm

Here is my reading, could someone please listen?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32
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Post by Algy Pug » October 1st, 2020, 4:43 pm

aradlaw wrote:
September 30th, 2020, 1:17 pm
Here is my reading, could someone please listen?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32
Hi David

PL notes

0:12
Line missing
Where the redolent woodland was warm,

0:58
Thunder in background?

0:18 to 1:23
Whistling sound in background - the wind?

1:59
Of honey unfilched of a bee
I heard
Of honey unflinched of a bee

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Post by Algy Pug » October 1st, 2020, 5:41 pm

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Post by aradlaw » October 2nd, 2020, 5:32 pm

Thank you Algy and Edwardo. :thumbs:

Thanks for the PL Algy, I will get to the edits soon. :wink:
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Post by aradlaw » October 3rd, 2020, 12:33 pm

Edits complete with the same time of 2:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
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Post by Algy Pug » October 3rd, 2020, 3:26 pm

aradlaw wrote:
October 3rd, 2020, 12:33 pm
Edits complete with the same time of 2:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3

Hi David

Just one tiny error:

2:00
Of honey unfilched of a bee,
I heard
Of honey unfilched by a bee,

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Post by aradlaw » October 5th, 2020, 7:12 am

Thank you Frank. :thumbs:
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Post by aradlaw » October 5th, 2020, 7:19 am

Algy Pug wrote:
October 3rd, 2020, 3:26 pm
Hi David

Just one tiny error:

Cheers
Last tiny correction (I Hope) :oops:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32
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Post by Algy Pug » October 5th, 2020, 7:40 am

aradlaw wrote:
October 5th, 2020, 7:19 am

Last tiny correction (I Hope) :oops:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32
Thanks David

Reading is now PL OK. :thumbs:

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Post by aradlaw » October 5th, 2020, 1:35 pm

Thank you for your patience Algy. :D
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