COMPLETE [Fortnightly Poetry] A Parental Ode to my Son, Aged Three Years and Five Months by Thomas Hood - dl

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Post by Bookworm360 » July 28th, 2020, 7:40 pm

RevJohn29 wrote:
July 28th, 2020, 9:55 am
If there is still need, I will record this poem as well.

John Stevens
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Post by Bookworm360 » July 28th, 2020, 8:25 pm

brucek wrote:
July 28th, 2020, 8:57 am
Here's mine at 3:31

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_bk_128kb.mp3

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Post by Bookworm360 » July 29th, 2020, 1:30 pm

Rohan, here are your PL notes:
0:12: You said, "let me first kiss away that tear" instead of "first let me kiss away that tear."
0:30: There is a repeat of "And unsoiled by sin".
0:43: "Swings" was said for "wings".
1:57:You said "Touched by the beauteous tints of dawning life", which should be "Touched with the beauteous tints of dawning life".
2:25: You said, "with many a lamb-like little frisk",but the word "little" shouldn't be in there.
2:42-2:43: You said "As fresh as the morn and as brilliant as its star" which should be "Fresh as the morn and brilliant as its star."
2:49: you said "behold as the hawk" instead of "bold as the hawk".
Asid from that, it was good. Please provide the updates soon.
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Post by Bookworm360 » July 29th, 2020, 1:35 pm

DrumJ8 wrote:
July 28th, 2020, 2:18 pm
Here is my contribution, at 02:54.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_ea_128kb.mp3

Thanks :)
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Post by Bookworm360 » July 29th, 2020, 1:45 pm

RevJohn29 wrote:
July 29th, 2020, 9:14 am
Here is mine, at 3:25

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3

John Stevens
This was a very good reading, except for one small detail:
1:10: "playful" was said for "playfellow."
Other than that, it was all right. Please provide this edit soon.
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Post by RevJohn29 » July 29th, 2020, 2:07 pm

[/quote]
This was a very good reading, except for one small detail:
1:10: "playful" was said for "playfellow."
Other than that, it was all right. Please provide this edit soon.
[/quote]

Thank you.

Here is the edited file, and I cleaned up the "pulling the tail" line.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3

John

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Post by Bookworm360 » July 31st, 2020, 10:53 am

RevJohn29 wrote:
July 29th, 2020, 2:07 pm
This was a very good reading, except for one small detail:
1:10: "playful" was said for "playfellow."
Other than that, it was all right. Please provide this edit soon.
[/quote]

Thank you.

Here is the edited file, and I cleaned up the "pulling the tail" line.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3

John
[/quote]


Thank you for your promptitude; it is now PL OK! :thumbs:
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Post by Bookworm360 » July 31st, 2020, 11:02 am

mleigh wrote:
July 30th, 2020, 5:11 pm
Here is my version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_mlm_128kb.mp3
2:49

Thanks,

M
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Post by aradlaw » August 1st, 2020, 8:03 am

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Post by Bookworm360 » August 2nd, 2020, 7:32 am

Hi aradlaw, great reading! There was just one thing:
3:00 You forgot to put in the line "Bold as the hawk, yet gentle as the dove" other than that, it was excellent. :mrgreen:
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Post by aradlaw » August 2nd, 2020, 7:57 am

That's what I get for reading from the screen (or could have been an editing casualty) end of excuses, here is the edited file...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_dl_128kb.mp3
new time... 3:20
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