PL Notes for section 58:
Please trim start as you are at almost 2 seconds.
At :18, please insert the full title of the book, author and please add: "Charlie Darwin, or the Lady Gibbon" before starting your chapter.
At 3:03 amusing to
7:40 remove title and author and just say "End of section 58"
Remove one second from the end
I wanted to mention that I am hearing a lot of background noise here and there. You might consider using the Noise Reduction feature (which I really don't like myself because it diminishes all of the recording and not just the noise). The best bet is to record in a very quiet spot right from the outset. In the worst spots, you could just rerecord silence and insert that. Some really great tips are available at Newbie Guide for Recording which is on Librivox's home page.
Please make sure to read all the MC's instructions that are under the MW. This tells you how to name your file, specifications for chapters, etc. This changes for each book.