awww a very nice characterization of Hermione. Your voice sounds very young, which considering, is optimal to play Hermione, compared to my more mature voice for Andromache. Hermione needs to sound younger I guess. But the fierceness you put in your voice in some longer speeches where you let your hatred and vengeance show, is perfectly conveyed I love the passion, great job.shreyasethi wrote: ↑August 1st, 2020, 1:21 pmHere are the recordings for Hermione-
Act 3(3:00)- https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_[hermione]__128kb.mp3
Act 4(9:02)- https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_[hermione]__128kb.mp3
I'll mark Act 3 already PL ok.
For Act 4 I have a few notes though:
> for the voice credit, please always use the full description as marked in the Magic Window: "Hermione, Daughter of Helen, betrothed to Pyrrhus, read by Shreyasethi"
> at 0:12: (p. 168) stumble and repeat: "I would know" can be cut once
> at 1:00: (p. 169) stumble and repeat: "you must slay" can be cut once
> at about 4:50: (p. 172) you forgot two passages on this page. The long one starts with "Ruin or no, I mean to have revenge" and ends with ""Proceeds from me" and the other is "Follow Orestes straight, he must do nought till he sees me again."
> at 9:00: "end of Act 4" will be said by the narrator, you could cut that out
> and as Todd says, better not include brackets [ ] in your filename, some links can be broken by them
thank you, looking forward to the other 2 acts