shreyasethi wrote: ↑
August 7th, 2020, 12:06 pm
I have finally edited all the acts and uploaded them I'm sosoososososoososososoosososososoosososo sorry for delaying for so long.
you're doing fine, don't worry
anyway, we still have to wait for our Orestes to come in, so there is still some time.
is now PL ok
I have two small notes for Acts 2 and 4 still though:
> at 6:03
: (p. 143) "whose worth
I could not but esteem" - I hear that you re-did the sentence but I still hear "wrath", which is a totally different word.
"Worth" rhymes with "birth"
> at 5:45
: (p. 172) "till he sees me again
" - you forgot "again" - this may be optional, but the meaning is a bit different, so if you don't mind, you could correct that as well. The rest of the speech was excellent and insistent though