COMPLETE[PLAY]Alias Miss Sherlock by Tubbs - thw

Post by **mightyfelix** » July 19th, 2020, 8:31 pm

Well done! A seamless edit, and you are all done! Thanks Jenn!

Salvationist · Post by **Salvationist** » July 20th, 2020, 3:20 pm

Thank you for the encouragement, Devorah! Here's Act 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_2_128kb.mp3 2:56

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » July 20th, 2020, 3:54 pm

mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 19th, 2020, 8:31 pm Well done! A seamless edit, and you are all done! Thanks Jenn!

Great! Thanks!

Post by **ToddHW** » July 21st, 2020, 8:11 am

Henry Markham in the MW ready for PL. Go give HIM the 3rd degree and see if he likes it!

Thanks, Todd

MichaelMaggs · Post by **MichaelMaggs** » July 23rd, 2020, 4:08 am

Here's the final narrator recording - act 4:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_narrator_4_128kb.mp3 @ 15.26

Post by **ToddHW** » July 23rd, 2020, 6:35 am

Thank you.

Todd

Salvationist · Post by **Salvationist** » July 23rd, 2020, 3:20 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_3_128kb.mp3 37 seconds

Post by **ToddHW** » July 23rd, 2020, 3:38 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » July 24th, 2020, 1:14 pm

Salvationist wrote: ↑July 20th, 2020, 3:20 pm Thank you for the encouragement, Devorah! Here's Act 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_2_128kb.mp3 2:56

Salvationist wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2020, 3:20 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_3_128kb.mp3 37 seconds

Both PL ok. Well done!

Post by **mightyfelix** » July 24th, 2020, 1:35 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑July 21st, 2020, 8:11 am Henry Markham in the MW ready for PL. Go give HIM the 3rd degree and see if he likes it!

Thanks, Todd

Well, sir, if y'don't mind my sayin' so, sir... er, that is, well Act 4 is ok, but, pardon me, sir... I think I found some teensy problems with Act 3? I mean, that is, you don't have to change anything of course, but, well, unless you want to...

1:04 OPTIONAL The line here is "D' know what right he has here." I think (though I'm not sure) that this should be closer to what we'd probably write as "dunno." You read it kind of as "D'ya know what right he has here?" like a question. It works this way, but I think it's not what was meant.
2:01 Script reads "I guess we know our business and what's right and fair..." I hear "I guess we know our business and that's right and fair..." Small change, so probably OPTIONAL as well.
4:15 OPTIONAL also. Script says ma'am, I hear madam.

Post by **mightyfelix** » July 24th, 2020, 2:16 pm

Act 3 stage directions are PL ok.
One tiny fix for Act 4.

8:14 Script reads "Sarah is down R. C. as Markham enters." I hear "Sarah is coming down R. C. as Markham enters." Not quite the same thing with that added word in there.

Post by **ToddHW** » July 25th, 2020, 12:30 pm

mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 24th, 2020, 1:35 pm
ToddHW wrote: ↑July 21st, 2020, 8:11 am Henry Markham in the MW ready for PL. Go give HIM the 3rd degree and see if he likes it!

Thanks, Todd
Well, sir, if y'don't mind my sayin' so, sir... er, that is, well Act 4 is ok, but, pardon me, sir... I think I found some teensy problems with Act 3? I mean, that is, you don't have to change anything of course, but, well, unless you want to...

1:04 OPTIONAL The line here is "D' know what right he has here." I think (though I'm not sure) that this should be closer to what we'd probably write as "dunno." You read it kind of as "D'ya know what right he has here?" like a question. It works this way, but I think it's not what was meant.
2:01 Script reads "I guess we know our business and what's right and fair..." I hear "I guess we know our business and that's right and fair..." Small change, so probably OPTIONAL as well.
4:15 OPTIONAL also. Script says ma'am, I hear madam.

Fixes made as you suggest for Act 3.

Thanks - especially for having the script copies in the PL note! - Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » July 25th, 2020, 5:46 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑July 25th, 2020, 12:30 pm
mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 24th, 2020, 1:35 pm
ToddHW wrote: ↑July 21st, 2020, 8:11 am Henry Markham in the MW ready for PL. Go give HIM the 3rd degree and see if he likes it!

Thanks, Todd
Well, sir, if y'don't mind my sayin' so, sir... er, that is, well Act 4 is ok, but, pardon me, sir... I think I found some teensy problems with Act 3? I mean, that is, you don't have to change anything of course, but, well, unless you want to...

1:04 OPTIONAL The line here is "D' know what right he has here." I think (though I'm not sure) that this should be closer to what we'd probably write as "dunno." You read it kind of as "D'ya know what right he has here?" like a question. It works this way, but I think it's not what was meant.
2:01 Script reads "I guess we know our business and what's right and fair..." I hear "I guess we know our business and that's right and fair..." Small change, so probably OPTIONAL as well.
4:15 OPTIONAL also. Script says ma'am, I hear madam.

Fixes made as you suggest for Act 3.

Thanks - especially for having the script copies in the PL note! - Todd

PL ok!

MichaelMaggs · Post by **MichaelMaggs** » July 27th, 2020, 7:07 am

mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 24th, 2020, 2:16 pm One tiny fix for Act 4.
8:14 Script reads "Sarah is down R. C. as Markham enters." I hear "Sarah is coming down R. C. as Markham enters." Not quite the same thing with that added word in there.

Here is act 4 again with the word omitted:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_narrator_4_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » July 27th, 2020, 2:02 pm

Thank you.

Todd