COMPLETE[PLAY]Alias Miss Sherlock by Tubbs - thw
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Well done! A seamless edit, and you are all done! Thanks Jenn!
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Thank you for the encouragement, Devorah! Here's Act 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_2_128kb.mp3 2:56
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_2_128kb.mp3 2:56
Great! Thanks!mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 19th, 2020, 8:31 pm Well done! A seamless edit, and you are all done! Thanks Jenn!
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Henry Markham in the MW ready for PL. Go give HIM the 3rd degree and see if he likes it!
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Here's the final narrator recording - act 4:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_narrator_4_128kb.mp3 @ 15.26
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_narrator_4_128kb.mp3 @ 15.26
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Salvationist wrote: ↑July 20th, 2020, 3:20 pm Thank you for the encouragement, Devorah! Here's Act 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_2_128kb.mp3 2:56
Both PL ok. Well done!Salvationist wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2020, 3:20 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_dickbrewster_3_128kb.mp3 37 seconds
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Well, sir, if y'don't mind my sayin' so, sir... er, that is, well Act 4 is ok, but, pardon me, sir... I think I found some teensy problems with Act 3? I mean, that is, you don't have to change anything of course, but, well, unless you want to...
1:04 OPTIONAL The line here is "D' know what right he has here." I think (though I'm not sure) that this should be closer to what we'd probably write as "dunno." You read it kind of as "D'ya know what right he has here?" like a question. It works this way, but I think it's not what was meant.
2:01 Script reads "I guess we know our business and what's right and fair..." I hear "I guess we know our business and that's right and fair..." Small change, so probably OPTIONAL as well.
4:15 OPTIONAL also. Script says ma'am, I hear madam.
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Act 3 stage directions are PL ok.
One tiny fix for Act 4.
8:14 Script reads "Sarah is down R. C. as Markham enters." I hear "Sarah is coming down R. C. as Markham enters." Not quite the same thing with that added word in there.
One tiny fix for Act 4.
8:14 Script reads "Sarah is down R. C. as Markham enters." I hear "Sarah is coming down R. C. as Markham enters." Not quite the same thing with that added word in there.
Fixes made as you suggest for Act 3.mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 24th, 2020, 1:35 pmWell, sir, if y'don't mind my sayin' so, sir... er, that is, well Act 4 is ok, but, pardon me, sir... I think I found some teensy problems with Act 3? I mean, that is, you don't have to change anything of course, but, well, unless you want to...
1:04 OPTIONAL The line here is "D' know what right he has here." I think (though I'm not sure) that this should be closer to what we'd probably write as "dunno." You read it kind of as "D'ya know what right he has here?" like a question. It works this way, but I think it's not what was meant.
2:01 Script reads "I guess we know our business and what's right and fair..." I hear "I guess we know our business and that's right and fair..." Small change, so probably OPTIONAL as well.
4:15 OPTIONAL also. Script says ma'am, I hear madam.
Thanks - especially for having the script copies in the PL note! - Todd
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PL ok!ToddHW wrote: ↑July 25th, 2020, 12:30 pmFixes made as you suggest for Act 3.mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 24th, 2020, 1:35 pmWell, sir, if y'don't mind my sayin' so, sir... er, that is, well Act 4 is ok, but, pardon me, sir... I think I found some teensy problems with Act 3? I mean, that is, you don't have to change anything of course, but, well, unless you want to...
1:04 OPTIONAL The line here is "D' know what right he has here." I think (though I'm not sure) that this should be closer to what we'd probably write as "dunno." You read it kind of as "D'ya know what right he has here?" like a question. It works this way, but I think it's not what was meant.
2:01 Script reads "I guess we know our business and what's right and fair..." I hear "I guess we know our business and that's right and fair..." Small change, so probably OPTIONAL as well.
4:15 OPTIONAL also. Script says ma'am, I hear madam.
Thanks - especially for having the script copies in the PL note! - Todd
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Here is act 4 again with the word omitted:mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 24th, 2020, 2:16 pm One tiny fix for Act 4.
8:14 Script reads "Sarah is down R. C. as Markham enters." I hear "Sarah is coming down R. C. as Markham enters." Not quite the same thing with that added word in there.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_narrator_4_128kb.mp3
Thank you.
Todd
Todd