COMPLETE For God And Gold by Julian Stafford Corbett - rap

[miss stav]

That's wonderful. Thank you.

[Rapunzelina]

Chapter 10: Spot checked and PL OK!

[Ares]

Hi guys!
I did it!
It was so hard for me, but i did it!

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/forgodandgold_09_corbett_128kb.mp3
duration: 51:16

I would like so much feedback please, for me to know what i did ok, and what could i focus on to improve. Waiting for comments!
Cheers!

[miss stav]

Wow. COngratulations. What a long chapter. Thanks a lot. Would you like to record another one or would you prefer to wait for feedback?

[Ares]

Wow. COngratulations. What a long chapter. Thanks a lot. Would you like to record another one or would you prefer to wait for feedback?

Thanks! yeah! it was so long, i felt i was loosing the energy as i went through, but i wanted to do it in one go.
I wanted at least a bit of feedback please, a couple of comments/suggestions after listening the chapter at least for a couple of minutes.
Then very probably i'll record more, i enjoy the book, it's interesting.

[Rapunzelina]

Chapter 9 is PL OK! Well done!

As for feedback, I could tell that you are not a native English speaker, but I could understand you alright, if that's what you are worried about! In such a long text with difficult words, which I think even native speakers could have mispronounced, you did a great job with very few mispronunciations! I liked your reading pace! It was easy to follow, even when using a different intonation (for example, not pausing at a comma, or pausing without a comma). All in all, a good result! Probably, for a perfect result, you would pre-read the text to find how to pronounce any unknown words, or to practice the correct intonation for a sentence; but you don't have to be a perfectionist!
The key is to have fun, which I think you did Your reading was calming, and I enjoyed your character voices!
Please read more! I believe the more you record, the more confident you'll feel in front of the microphone, which will make it even more fun

[Ares]

Chapter 9 is PL OK! Well done!

As for feedback, I could tell that you are not a native English speaker, but I could understand you alright, if that's what you are worried about! In such a long text with difficult words, which I think even native speakers could have mispronounced, you did a great job with very few mispronunciations! I liked your reading pace! It was easy to follow, even when using a different intonation (for example, not pausing at a comma, or pausing without a comma). All in all, a good result! Probably, for a perfect result, you would pre-read the text to find how to pronounce any unknown words, or to practice the correct intonation for a sentence; but you don't have to be a perfectionist!
The key is to have fun, which I think you did Your reading was calming, and I enjoyed your character voices!
Please read more! I believe the more you record, the more confident you'll feel in front of the microphone, which will make it even more fun

Thanks a lot for the feedback, i'll try to keep all those words in mind, i very appreciate all of them.
May i claim chapter 20 ? I'll try to pre-read it this time

[miss stav]

Sure. It is all yours. Have fun.

[shreyasethi]

Hi
I've claimed sections 1 through 6 and I totally intend to submit them hopefully by the next week's end. I'm so sorry for causing the delay I've been volunteering a lot these past few weeks and that with school made it pretty tough to record or edit my audios. I am really sorry.
Thanks
-SS

[miss stav]

It's ok. I totally understand.

[jenno]

Here is chapter 11

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/forgodandgold_11_corbett_128kb.mp3

duration 37.21

Cheers


Jennifer

[miss stav]

Huge thanks. Would you like to read more chapters from this book?

[Rapunzelina]

Chapter 11 is PL OK!

[shreyasethi]

Hi!!!!
Here is Chapter 6 (24:40)-
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/forgodandgold_06_corbett_128kb.mp3
Thanks
-SS

[miss stav]

Thanks a lot.