COMPLETE A Day's Journey by Netta Syrett - rap

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RitaBoutros
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Post by RitaBoutros » August 6th, 2020, 9:21 am

Thank you so much!

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Post by Hammslice » August 6th, 2020, 11:15 am

miss stav wrote:
August 6th, 2020, 8:31 am
I can sign Helen up for 13 and 14. And I don't need to add the revised file to the mw, it is added otomaticly.
Yes this is fine

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Post by Hammslice » August 7th, 2020, 2:48 am

RitaBoutros wrote:
August 6th, 2020, 6:37 am
Here is my updated version.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_08_syrett_128kb.mp3


I redid the whole thing, and I took some time to learn more about narration and audio editing. Sorry it took so long to get done. I hope this will have better results!!

File size: 15.28MB
Track Length: 15M 55.14S

Helen
Hi Helen
I listened to your entire file again and have a couple of small things that need to be corrected:

3:00 reckless pacing should be restless pacing
10:47 believe in her should be disbelieve in her


In the future, it is preferable that you not re-record the entire file again, but merely do spot edits to make corrections. Listening to a whole file again is very time consuming for the checker and not really necessary.

Deleting something in Audacity is very easy: Just highlight the section and use Control + x

Adding something is likewise easy. You're basically doing a copy and paste:

Highlight the section where you want to add. Use Control + n to open a new window.
Record the new text in the new window and then copy it (Control + c). Close the new window without saving.

Return to your original window and click at the top in a neutral spot. Use Control + v and your new text will appear in the spot you had highlighted previously.


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_08_syrett_128kb.mp3

Section 8, corrected :D

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Post by RitaBoutros » August 7th, 2020, 4:19 am

Section 8 is PL OK
Thank you

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Post by Hammslice » August 7th, 2020, 8:29 pm


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Post by miss stav » August 7th, 2020, 9:37 pm

Huge thanks.
Love gothic novels? Try Children Of The Abbey. Like surprising mysteries? Try The Amathist Cross. Looking for an easy read? Try Harriet's Choice.

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Post by RitaBoutros » August 8th, 2020, 6:21 am

Hammslice wrote:
August 7th, 2020, 8:29 pm
Section 13 ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_13_syrett_128kb.mp3

15m 55s
14.5 MB
Helen, it appears this recording is actually chapter 8, which has already been PLed. Can you check this? Thanks

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Post by ZeppyJ45 » August 8th, 2020, 8:33 am

Hey! Could I please claim chapters 15 and 16 if they're still free? :)

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Post by miss stav » August 8th, 2020, 11:08 am

Sure, all yours. Have fun.
Love gothic novels? Try Children Of The Abbey. Like surprising mysteries? Try The Amathist Cross. Looking for an easy read? Try Harriet's Choice.

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Post by Hammslice » August 9th, 2020, 5:22 am

RitaBoutros wrote:
August 8th, 2020, 6:21 am
Hammslice wrote:
August 7th, 2020, 8:29 pm
Section 13 ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_13_syrett_128kb.mp3

15m 55s
14.5 MB
Helen, it appears this recording is actually chapter 8, which has already been PLed. Can you check this? Thanks
I am so sorry...I don't mean to be so much work! I'll get better at this yet :roll:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_13_syrett_128kb.mp3

15.5 MiB
 
Track Length
16:55.14 (m:ss.ss)

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Post by miss stav » August 9th, 2020, 8:45 pm

Helen, if you don't try, how would you expect to learn? So the first times would be challenging, but later... Well less and less I guess. I remember my first time managing a project here, I was a nightmare.
Love gothic novels? Try Children Of The Abbey. Like surprising mysteries? Try The Amathist Cross. Looking for an easy read? Try Harriet's Choice.

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Post by RitaBoutros » August 10th, 2020, 6:35 am

Hammslice wrote:
August 7th, 2020, 8:29 pm
Section 13 ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_13_syrett_128kb.mp3

15m 55s
14.5 MB

Helen, section 13 is very nicely read. Just a couple of notes:

2:57 stood her in good stead
5:33 she had met few delete a -- changes the meaning entirely
8:54 of enamel
15:08 affectation

Take one second off at the end

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Post by Hammslice » August 11th, 2020, 5:22 am

RitaBoutros wrote:
August 10th, 2020, 6:35 am
Hammslice wrote:
August 7th, 2020, 8:29 pm
Section 13 ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_13_syrett_128kb.mp3

15m 55s
14.5 MB

Helen, section 13 is very nicely read. Just a couple of notes:

2:57 stood her in good stead
5:33 she had met few delete a -- changes the meaning entirely
8:54 of enamel
15:08 affectation

Take one second off at the end


section 13, edited

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_13_syrett_128kb.mp3

Thanks!!

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Post by RitaBoutros » August 11th, 2020, 5:58 am

Revised Section 13 is perfect - PL OK

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Post by miss stav » August 11th, 2020, 6:46 am

See, Helen? You made some progress.
Love gothic novels? Try Children Of The Abbey. Like surprising mysteries? Try The Amathist Cross. Looking for an easy read? Try Harriet's Choice.

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