COMPLETE A Day's Journey by Netta Syrett - rap

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Post by ProfoundMenace » September 13th, 2020, 6:05 pm

The duration is 15:18 :)

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Post by miss stav » September 13th, 2020, 7:16 pm

Great. Thank you.
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Post by neecheelok70 » September 13th, 2020, 8:00 pm

You are welcome! Jim

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Post by ProfoundMenace » September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm


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Post by RitaBoutros » September 15th, 2020, 5:33 am

ProfoundMenace wrote:
September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm
Here is Chapter 1 (8:55)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_01_syrett_128kb.mp3
Can you tell me if this has been corrected per my original notes to you, or if this is a new recording? We definitely don't want you to rerecord a section as it is very time consuming for the checker to have to listen to the entire recording again.

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Post by neecheelok70 » September 15th, 2020, 6:46 am


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Post by ProfoundMenace » September 15th, 2020, 8:14 am

RitaBoutros wrote:
September 15th, 2020, 5:33 am
ProfoundMenace wrote:
September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm
Here is Chapter 1 (8:55)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_01_syrett_128kb.mp3
Can you tell me if this has been corrected per my original notes to you, or if this is a new recording? We definitely don't want you to rerecord a section as it is very time consuming for the checker to have to listen to the entire recording again.

Sorry for the confusion. It is corrected as per the notes. I balanced the volume and only re-recorded the sections where I had made errors. I re-recorded the first 1.5 paragraphs because I could not balance the sound and correct the "peculiar-particular" error smoothly. The second error, I managed to just add the word "far" and maintain continuity. I also added the "end of chapter 1." I hope this isn't too much trouble, sorry again for the inconvenience

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Post by miss stav » September 15th, 2020, 11:33 am

Thank you all. Wow you were busy.
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Post by RitaBoutros » September 16th, 2020, 5:11 am

ProfoundMenace wrote:
September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm
Here is Chapter 1 (8:55)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_01_syrett_128kb.mp3
PL Notes:

Everything sounds fine and all corrections made. We still don't have 5 seconds of silence at the end however. Can you add this?

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Post by RitaBoutros » September 16th, 2020, 5:26 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
September 13th, 2020, 9:44 am
Here is Section 3. Hey, Rapunzelina! :D

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_03_syrett_128kb.mp3

9:05
Sec 3 is PL OK

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Post by RitaBoutros » September 16th, 2020, 6:00 am

ProfoundMenace wrote:
September 13th, 2020, 5:32 pm
Here is Chapter 2. Please let me know if there is anything I can improve. I will have the edits of Chapter 1 by tomorrow :D

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_02_syrett_128kb.mp3
PL notes for section 2:

3:08 in a gown that could be
4:18 "for the last year and a half" should be "last year or two"
8:22 "last year" should be "that year"
13:04 "she always speaks" should be "he always speaks"
13:35 "you'd like to come to my room" should be "you'd like to come to your room"

There should be a full 5 seconds of silence at the end

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Post by RitaBoutros » September 16th, 2020, 6:26 am

neecheelok70 wrote:
September 15th, 2020, 6:46 am
Here is Chapter 6--sad for the girl:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_06_syrett_128kb.mp3

12:37

Jim
Sec 6 is PL OK
Syrett writes with a certain truth in this - maybe has experienced it herself

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Post by neecheelok70 » September 16th, 2020, 2:57 pm

Thanks, Rita. :thumbs:

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Post by miss stav » September 17th, 2020, 11:57 am

Huge thanks.
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