COMPLETE A Day's Journey by Netta Syrett - rap
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Can you tell me if this has been corrected per my original notes to you, or if this is a new recording? We definitely don't want you to rerecord a section as it is very time consuming for the checker to have to listen to the entire recording again.ProfoundMenace wrote: ↑September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm Here is Chapter 1 (8:55)
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Here is Chapter 6--sad for the girl:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_06_syrett_128kb.mp3
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Jim
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RitaBoutros wrote: ↑September 15th, 2020, 5:33 amCan you tell me if this has been corrected per my original notes to you, or if this is a new recording? We definitely don't want you to rerecord a section as it is very time consuming for the checker to have to listen to the entire recording again.ProfoundMenace wrote: ↑September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm Here is Chapter 1 (8:55)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_01_syrett_128kb.mp3
Sorry for the confusion. It is corrected as per the notes. I balanced the volume and only re-recorded the sections where I had made errors. I re-recorded the first 1.5 paragraphs because I could not balance the sound and correct the "peculiar-particular" error smoothly. The second error, I managed to just add the word "far" and maintain continuity. I also added the "end of chapter 1." I hope this isn't too much trouble, sorry again for the inconvenience
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PL Notes:ProfoundMenace wrote: ↑September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm Here is Chapter 1 (8:55)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_01_syrett_128kb.mp3
Everything sounds fine and all corrections made. We still don't have 5 seconds of silence at the end however. Can you add this?
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Sec 3 is PL OKneecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 13th, 2020, 9:44 am Here is Section 3. Hey, Rapunzelina!
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_03_syrett_128kb.mp3
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PL notes for section 2:ProfoundMenace wrote: ↑September 13th, 2020, 5:32 pm Here is Chapter 2. Please let me know if there is anything I can improve. I will have the edits of Chapter 1 by tomorrow
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_02_syrett_128kb.mp3
3:08 in a gown that could be
4:18 "for the last year and a half" should be "last year or two"
8:22 "last year" should be "that year"
13:04 "she always speaks" should be "he always speaks"
13:35 "you'd like to come to my room" should be "you'd like to come to your room"
There should be a full 5 seconds of silence at the end
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Sec 6 is PL OKneecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 15th, 2020, 6:46 am Here is Chapter 6--sad for the girl:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_06_syrett_128kb.mp3
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Syrett writes with a certain truth in this - maybe has experienced it herself
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Here is Section 7.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_07_syrett_128kb.mp3
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Jim
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_07_syrett_128kb.mp3
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