COMPLETE: {SOLO} Europe and Elsewhere by Mark Twain - lny

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Post by johng » May 11th, 2020, 12:07 pm

00 is done
(it's really LONG!!! :-( )

Here we go!!
:-)
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Post by cimt » May 11th, 2020, 2:56 pm

johng wrote:
May 11th, 2020, 12:07 pm
00 is done
(it's really LONG!!! :-( )

Here we go!!
:-)
Section 00 PL Notes-
Words that were messed/missed up are underlined

5:14- ...he began his connection with...
(said section)
15:15- ...Tom Sawyer Abroad, sent forth...
(said set)
20:00- ...as we find it in...
(did not say the word)
23:45- ...when he is a full-grown man.
(said fully)
31:04- ...spent his own boyhood, and...
(said childhood)
38:10- ...accurate, however unacademic.
(said always)
41:00- ...himself, and Moliere also,...
(said too)
42:34- ...comic as its elder brother and...
(did not say the word)


Great job, I really enjoyed listening and I loved hearing the Appreciation by Brander Matthews. I'm sorry if the notes seem too harsh, that's not how I mean them. :D
Carisa

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Post by johng » May 11th, 2020, 3:41 pm

Harsh?? Not at all ...
thank you so much for your diligence!! I haven’t gone through this yet but it’s great to get the corrections and I’m sorry there were so many needed!!
Onward and upward!!!
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Post by johng » May 12th, 2020, 5:42 am

00 is corrected and ready for a double check!!

thanks again for your careful listening!!
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Post by johng » May 12th, 2020, 7:02 am

01 is done...

BUT...

at 26:22 ...I think a CLOSE quote was missing!!!!

I put it IN!!!!

But check it out...see what you think...
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Post by cimt » May 12th, 2020, 9:35 am

johng wrote:
May 12th, 2020, 7:02 am
01 is done...

BUT...

at 26:22 ...I think a CLOSE quote was missing!!!!

I put it IN!!!!

But check it out...see what you think...
Section 1 PL Notes-
00:00- "Section 1 of Europe and Elsewhere. This is a LibriVox recording. All LibriVox recordings are in the public domain. For more information, or to volunteer, please visit: librivox DOT org"
"Europe and Elsewhere, by Mark Twain, read by [name]. A Memorable Midnight Experience"
(the intro wasn't consistent with the first section and I think you might of accidentally cut part of the Librivox "public domain/announcement" stuff out)
7:20- ...how to build in those...
(added "it" before the word "in")
7:57- ..see by these scattering clusters...
(said scattered)

Great Job! :clap: I'm really enjoying listening to some more Mark Twain!
Carisa

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Post by johng » May 12th, 2020, 9:51 am

[/quote]
(the intro wasn't consistent with the first section and I think you might of accidentally cut part of the Librivox "public domain/announcement" stuff out)

[/quote]

Thanks!

FYI
the "shortened" Librivox intro is standard after the FIRST section:

"For the second and all subsequent sections, you may optionally use the shortened form of this intro disclaimer:

"Chapter [number] of Europe and Elsewhere by Mark Twain. This LibriVox recording is in the Public Domain."

and I add..."Read by John Greenman"...at the beginning AND at the end...because there have been many cases of changes in attribution....people have been selling my material under another name!!!

:-)
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Post by cimt » May 12th, 2020, 10:17 am

johng wrote:
May 12th, 2020, 9:51 am
(the intro wasn't consistent with the first section and I think you might of accidentally cut part of the Librivox "public domain/announcement" stuff out)

[/quote]

Thanks!

FYI
the "shortened" Librivox intro is standard after the FIRST section:

"For the second and all subsequent sections, you may optionally use the shortened form of this intro disclaimer:

"Chapter [number] of Europe and Elsewhere by Mark Twain. This LibriVox recording is in the Public Domain."

and I add..."Read by John Greenman"...at the beginning AND at the end...because there have been many cases of changes in attribution....people have been selling my material under another name!!!

:-)
[/quote]

Thank you for letting me know! I would've had no idea. :)
Carisa

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Post by johng » May 12th, 2020, 10:31 am

01 is corrected and sent in!

(I didn't change the open.)

Great catches!
Thanks,
-j
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Post by johng » May 13th, 2020, 4:50 am

FYI
I've changed 01 to read "chapter one" at the open and close...and will continue with "chapter"
I think we can leave "00" as "section".
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Post by cimt » May 13th, 2020, 5:36 am

johng wrote:
May 13th, 2020, 4:50 am
FYI
I've changed 01 to read "chapter one" at the open and close...and will continue with "chapter"
I think we can leave "00" as "section".
Sounds good.
Carisa

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Post by cimt » May 13th, 2020, 7:33 am

Section 2 PL Notes-
9:56- ...wrought gallantly always, in...
(said away)
16:10- One of the very first things...
(missed the word "very")
22:09- ...a retinue of quaint...
(said revenue)

Great Job!
Carisa

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Post by johng » May 13th, 2020, 6:02 pm

02 is corrected.
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Post by cimt » May 13th, 2020, 6:28 pm

Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I will have some stuff going on Thursday and Friday and probably won’t get to any new recordings. On Saturday I should be able to catch up on everything.
Carisa

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Post by johng » May 14th, 2020, 4:28 am

Tnx for the heads up!!
No problem ...
I’ll just keep chugging away! :-)
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