cadastra wrote: ↑
June 5th, 2020, 10:33 am
Sections 19, 34, and 45 PL notes:
Michele, so good to hear your voice on this project. The poems are beautifully read. Your reading of "The Suicide" gave me goosebumps. The only issue is that the wrong outro is used after each poem. The outro should be "End of poem" not "End of [poem name]." For example, for Section 19, the outro should be "End of poem" not "End of 'The Suicide.'"
Same with all 3 outros.
I generally end any poems, stories or chapters I read by repeating the title, as it helps listeners reconnect with what they just heard and maybe remember it better. It serves the exact same purpose as denoting "end of poem", with lagniappe, but I'll change them if you insist. Some people add their names, locations, dates and websites to the Outro and that's allowed too.
Of course, if the Outro required End of Section #, or Chapter #, that's got to go there.