COMPLETE [solo]Andiron tales by John Kendrick Bangs - kiki

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 13th, 2020, 5:28 am

adr6090 wrote: ↑March 12th, 2020, 4:54 pm 1 of 2 edited & posted,
April

Yay! I will be able to listen to whatever you have uploaded later this evening or over the weekend

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 13th, 2020, 7:34 am

jennlea wrote: ↑March 13th, 2020, 5:28 am
adr6090 wrote: ↑March 12th, 2020, 4:54 pm 1 of 2 edited & posted,
April
Yay! I will be able to listen to whatever you have uploaded later this evening or over the weekend

Sounds like a plan!

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 15th, 2020, 5:00 am

One note for Chapter 3:

2:36- "the oranges are ripe", heard "the organs are ripe"

I laughed about the suggestion to put a cork in the boy's ear

Chapter 4 is PL-OK

The poker is learning that the grass isn't always greener on the other side! Can't wait to hear the rest of the story on how he became a poker.

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 15th, 2020, 11:27 am

jennlea wrote: ↑March 15th, 2020, 5:00 am One note for Chapter 3:

2:36- "the oranges are ripe", heard "the organs are ripe"

I laughed about the suggestion to put a cork in the boy's ear

Chapter 4 is PL-OK

The poker is learning that the grass isn't always greener on the other side! Can't wait to hear the rest of the story on how he became a poker.

Can not believe that I didn't hear my error

Better now. The poker is most certainly learning!
April

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 15th, 2020, 12:04 pm

Chapter 3 is all good now

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 15th, 2020, 2:03 pm

jennlea wrote: ↑March 15th, 2020, 12:04 pm Chapter 3 is all good now

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 20th, 2020, 6:45 am

I’ll try to get caught up listening here in the next day or so! I’m working from home at the moment and I feel like everything is taking me twice as long to get done

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 20th, 2020, 7:05 am

jennlea wrote: ↑March 20th, 2020, 6:45 am I’ll try to get caught up listening here in the next day or so! I’m working from home at the moment and I feel like everything is taking me twice as long to get done

It is okay with me, take as long as needed.

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 21st, 2020, 4:01 pm

Chapters 5 and 7 are PL-OK!

Chapter 6 Notes:

1:12- missing whispered the Poker

10:30- There's no satisfying you fellows- this needs to be moved to 10:38. You have a phrase at 10:38 that says "there's nothing satisfying you fellows" that you can remove. (I hope that makes sense!)

Chapter 8 Notes:

3:57- there is a loud squeak that should be easy to remove

I giggled every time the Poker called the Bellows wheezy

I'm sad there are only a few chapters left!

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 22nd, 2020, 7:40 am

jennlea wrote: ↑March 21st, 2020, 4:01 pm Chapters 5 and 7 are PL-OK!

Chapter 6 Notes:

1:12- missing whispered the Poker

10:30- There's no satisfying you fellows- this needs to be moved to 10:38. You have a phrase at 10:38 that says "there's nothing satisfying you fellows" that you can remove. (I hope that makes sense!)

Chapter 8 Notes:

3:57- there is a loud squeak that should be easy to remove

I giggled every time the Poker called the Bellows wheezy

I'm sad there are only a few chapters left!

Good morning to you!
I will fix the errors you have mentioned as well as posting the remaining chapters for your perusal.

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 22nd, 2020, 7:30 pm

hello!! Yes, I did fix the errors and post another one for you. Only 1 left now for me to put the final effort in with and than I will post, probably tomorrow sometime.

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 23rd, 2020, 3:17 am

Chapters 6 and 8 are now PL-OK!

Chapter 9 Note:

0:09- On the Oscycle -repeated at 0:11

Looking forward to the last chapter of Tom's adventures!

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 23rd, 2020, 7:38 am

jennlea wrote: ↑March 23rd, 2020, 3:17 am Chapters 6 and 8 are now PL-OK!

Chapter 9 Note:

0:09- On the Oscycle -repeated at 0:11

Looking forward to the last chapter of Tom's adventures!

It is a good one, the last chapter.

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 23rd, 2020, 4:42 pm

Chapter 9 is now PL-OK!

Will listen to the last chapter tonight!

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » March 23rd, 2020, 6:56 pm

The last chapter is PL-OK!!

I have really enjoyed this book! In fact, I’ll be saving it to read to my son when he is old enough to appreciate and enjoy the adventures Tom had!