You're welcome, and I'll see you around the LV playground!

You're welcome, and I'll see you around the LV playground!
Oh wow, thank you so much! I really enjoyed doing it! I didn't know if the singing or the accent(s) would work, so I'm relieved and gratified that they did!msfry wrote: ↑April 16th, 2020, 7:19 amSection 17 and 18 are PL OK.
Good morning, Ben. I thoroughly enjoyed your reading of Harmony, including your singing, and the southern accent! It was not an easy story to deliver on with all those twists, turns and character accents, particularly it being your first contribution to LV, and it was a long story to edit too. You did a 100% magnificent job! So glad to have you on the project.
adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 25th, 2020, 1:31 amHello Michel,
Can I take 9 and 10 please?
Thanks,
Adrian
adrianstephens wrote: ↑April 25th, 2020, 1:32 amadrianstephens wrote: ↑April 25th, 2020, 1:31 amHello Michele,
Can I take 9 and 10 please?
Thanks,
Adrian
Here's section 10 for PL @ 19:42
Hello, here's the update for spot PLmsfry wrote: ↑April 27th, 2020, 6:54 amPL Notes on Section 9/Champion, Part 1
Great story so far, though entirely without merit as you say. A few notes:
Your lead is shorter that .5 seconds, which could result in the first word or so being cut off.
INTRO: 0-1:07, is at about 82 db, very quiet. Could use a boost Amplify +5
9:45 Emma's brother and the prettiest little thing in Milwaukee, and is missing (implying Emma's brother is pretty).
11:45 having a sizeable account at each place, you say amount.
17:12,17:32 and a 3 other places prior to it that I did not notate) chanct is chance with a t at the end, not chankt. I don't think listeners will get what "chankt" is. Of course, neither word is in the dictionary.
I am giving you a chanct here to fix this, but only if you want to sound pretty. :mrgreen:
Read for spot PL. https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/howtowriteshortstories_10_lardner_128kb.mp3