[SOLO] The Fable of the Bees by Bernard Mandeville - philc

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Post by LCaulkins » April 25th, 2020, 8:07 am

29 is PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by mmunoz » April 25th, 2020, 10:27 pm

Section 30 is ready for PL.

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Post by LCaulkins » April 26th, 2020, 9:55 am

30 is PL OK :thumbs:

Let the sailors burn and drown.
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Post by mmunoz » April 26th, 2020, 11:17 pm

Section 31 is ready for PL.

Edit: We're coming up on the dialogues pretty quickly. Should I just read the speaker's names? I don't think I'll be any good at separating their voices.

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Post by LCaulkins » April 27th, 2020, 7:06 am

(I'll get to 31 a little later today.)

On the dialogues, yeah, read the names. You could mark Horatio or Cleomenes to read in a slower pace, so they stand out a little bit from each other, but not worry about changing your voice.
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Post by LCaulkins » April 27th, 2020, 12:03 pm

mmunoz wrote:
April 26th, 2020, 11:17 pm
Section 31 is ready for PL.

Edit: We're coming up on the dialogues pretty quickly. Should I just read the speaker's names? I don't think I'll be any good at separating their voices.
That was a long section for you!

Very minor notes, that may or may not be worthy of change to you:

37:26 "the generality of the people should fall in love with them" - the word love is not in the text

40:02 "page 237" should be 235. (would anybody ever need that to be accurate?)
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Post by mmunoz » April 27th, 2020, 9:17 pm

The sections will be slightly shorter by wordcount from now on; we'll see if the dialogue format threatens to put them over the time limit as they are.

The spot PL edits are quick to make compared with the usual recording and editing, so I'm fine with changing small mistakes.

Section 31 is ready for spot PL.
Section 32 is ready for PL.

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Post by LCaulkins » April 28th, 2020, 7:55 am

Haha! Another laugh-out-loud moment "I appoint the first of March, before St. James’s Gate, for that purpose, it being the birthday of the best and most glorious queen upon earth; and the burning of your book the smallest atonement you can make, for endeavouring to corrupt and debauch his majesty’s subjects in their principles." . . .


Section 31 is PL OK :thumbs:

NOTES for Section 32:

26:15 "So he never opposed those easy casuists" - should be "so he ever opposed"
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Post by mmunoz » April 28th, 2020, 9:24 pm

LCaulkins wrote:
April 28th, 2020, 7:55 am
Haha! Another laugh-out-loud moment "I appoint the first of March, before St. James’s Gate, for that purpose, it being the birthday of the best and most glorious queen upon earth; and the burning of your book the smallest atonement you can make, for endeavouring to corrupt and debauch his majesty’s subjects in their principles." . . .
Yeah, he tries to give a sassy response about not reading the book, but Innes clearly has the better insult. It makes me curious what's in that book.

Section 32 is ready for spot PL.
Section 33 is ready for PL.

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Post by LCaulkins » April 29th, 2020, 7:37 am

32 and 33 are PL OK :thumbs: :thumbs:
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Post by mmunoz » April 29th, 2020, 9:20 pm

Section 34 is ready for PL.

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Post by LCaulkins » April 30th, 2020, 7:09 am

34 is PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by mmunoz » April 30th, 2020, 11:05 pm

Section 35 is ready for PL.

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Post by LCaulkins » May 1st, 2020, 8:55 am

Section 35 is PL OK :thumbs:

You found a good spot for dividing this dialogue
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Post by mmunoz » May 1st, 2020, 6:34 pm

Section 36 is ready for PL.

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